Reveiw my Updated Landing Page!

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  1. #1
    Hi,

    I just updated my landing page as new looks and neat contents. Please review my site.

    http://ebaypack.com

    Post your feedback and comments.

    Note: You don't need to signup for my list

    To Your Success
    Sheriff
     
    sheriffonline, Dec 2, 2007 IP
  2. aukyo

    aukyo Active Member

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    Sorta bright on the eyes. I would change the main background color to maybe a dark greenish color to ease it out a bit. Other than that it looks okay.
     
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  3. JTRSe7en

    JTRSe7en Active Member

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    #3
    Clean look .. I don't mind the color.
     
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    eseller01 Active Member

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    #4
    clean look can ad some examples and screenshots
     
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  5. crazycatsville

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    #5
    Kinda unique color scheme but looks ok.. Overall, I rate your page 6.5 out of 10.
     
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  6. slyray

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    #6
    Too bright logo imho
     
    slyray, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  7. ttoledan

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    I think it looks very neat and professional. Color is good.
     
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  8. varchar

    varchar Peon

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    #8
    Nice site... but definitely should work on the logo a little. It does look like a turnkey site that people just paste their name over...
     
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    exodusms Active Member

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    I love the thumbs up, like I am making a good decision by entering my email. Anyway I was not a huge fan of the background color but that is about all. Overall good.
     
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  10. reallifepixel

    reallifepixel Guest

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    A little turnkey and sterile, but non-offensive and effective. Decent enough for the purposes.
     
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  11. sheriffonline

    sheriffonline Well-Known Member

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    I would like to thanking for all the reviewers taking time to review my new updated landing page.

    I will take seriously whatever comments/feedbacks/suggetions to make my page better.

    Once again i thanks to all.
     
    sheriffonline, Dec 4, 2007 IP
  12. busman3000

    busman3000 Peon

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    #12
    The text with the yellow background is not good. all the websites that collect your emails and sell/rent them use it. remove it and replace it with some better text or a good looking image.
     
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  13. waxingpoetic

    waxingpoetic Well-Known Member

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    #13
    Nice pagetop...gets attention. It is definitely the focal point. The background color works...I'm just not a huge fan of brown or shades thereof.

    First sentence should say: "these powerful freebies"
    Space between "Download" and "$879"

    I would suggest removing the dashes at the end of your bullet point phrases.

    Otherwise, looks good. Nice job.
     
    waxingpoetic, Dec 4, 2007 IP
  14. AxXo

    AxXo Guest

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    #14
    nice content but a little to bright
     
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    #15
    Works for me ... time will tell if it works for your targeted audience.
     
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  16. sheriffonline

    sheriffonline Well-Known Member

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    #16
    Once again thank you for review my landing page. i am seriously taking your comments and suggetions.

    I am making changes as my reviewer's advice step by step.

    I am very glad to all my reviewers to gave me a gud suggetions to make my page better.

     
    sheriffonline, Dec 6, 2007 IP
  17. brasco

    brasco Guest

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    #17
    looks good, but you could add a little bit more content on it though
     
    brasco, Dec 6, 2007 IP