Reveiw my Business Template

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by blktallos, Jun 17, 2008.

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    Tell me what you think about this template.
    I tried to make it proffesional looking as much as i could.

    critiques or reveiws would be great:)
     
    blktallos, Jun 17, 2008 IP
  2. V3nom

    V3nom Peon

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    #2
    More contrast to your design would be perfect and try to fix fonts.( hard to read).
    Use these simple rules and your design will be good as possible:
    1. Clear design is always best. Look at web2.0 design standards.
    2. Good letters and background contrast is important too.
    3. Fixed size design is history.

    These are basics. With time you will create your own rules.
     
    V3nom, Jun 18, 2008 IP
  3. Ireej

    Ireej Banned

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    #3
    Both colors, you used are too fast, and visitors are not prone to hook up your web page, at least the background should be kool so as to welcoming. And the biggest flaw i see is font size. Adjust that (reduce) :)
     
    Ireej, Jun 18, 2008 IP
  4. montiuk

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    pretty good design first thing that hits me is the font is stands out too much for me and im getting sore eyes already think of how long your real visitors would feel.

    Try changing font size, font etc and run various tests aswell to see how long visitors spend on each template.
     
    montiuk, Jun 18, 2008 IP
  5. blktallos

    blktallos Active Member

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    what font do you guys suggest that i use?? This is all just for the preveiw.Now that i look at it the font is used to much and thats what is killing this design..:( what do you think about the logo? The logo i had before was really simple and i didnt like it to much. when i start coding the template do you think i should use verdana for my font?
    what font do people usually use on there sites?
     
    blktallos, Jun 18, 2008 IP
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    #6
    very nice no comments
     
    LinksMaster007, Jul 19, 2008 IP
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    too much bold, too much caps lock, the whole page is shouting at me and I want to run away so i will.......
     
    siberia77, Jul 19, 2008 IP
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    MazeMiami Banned

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    not sure lime green is meant for and a professional business sitend
     
    MazeMiami, Jul 19, 2008 IP
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    Bold = bad, try a more neon green.
     
    willtx, Jul 19, 2008 IP