Attn Clickbank affiilates. I just released a clickbank program that deals with trading the Nasdaq. This product is especially great for those who have clients in the UK, Australia and Canada because people in those countries can receive 20 pounds FREE (Roughly $40 USD) in their trading account with the code that I give them. We pay 57% commission which is about $50 on a $97 sale. You can read about the product at NasdaqProfits.com The affiliate site is NasdaqProfits.com/affiliates.html
I am not an expert copywriter myself, but except the distracting background, your text is somewhat dull and boring. Not the content, its look. There are big parts of normal text, then big parts of bold text, then big parts of large text. They don't mix up. Try to highlight key phrases from the regular text with some bold (for example, "Wow, what a Nice WINNER IT WAS!" or "I like putting odds in my favor"). And yes, that background is very distracting. By the way, what is that item number one (the $20 one with $20 recurring billing)? Good luck! nadavs
I like the domain name, but a sales page like that is hard to recommend. Please rework the sales page and you have an affiliate. A rebrandable copy of the product might be useful as well. Given that it's $97, the buyer needs more reasons and convincing in volatile market conditions. Just some points.
I agree with others - most buyers will get bored before they scroll to the "buy" link. Most likely this will not convert well. First two posts here have nice landing page templates
Agree with the others. 1. Text size is too big 2. The background is very distracting 3. The page is too short, usually products about stock trading are much longer with more information 4. I might be wrong, but I think the product is overpriced.
1) The background's too distracting and ugly 2) The headline has punctuational mistakes 3) The sales letter is full of punctuational mistakes 4) The sales letter is cheesy and boring 5) The images are blurry 6) There're no contact, About, Privacy, etc., details
make the background more dull when you have lots of bullet poiints row after row.. .make each row bold - normal - bold etc. this breaks it up and will be easier to read center the pictures give it a little more life