Reason for rejection. Just to see if I have this right..

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by HarfynnTeuport, Apr 6, 2009.

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    The reason one of my article was rejected was because:

    'Your article must not contain a teaser link or phrase that requires a reader to click away or reference another source in order to receive the full benefit of the article. Please remove this and ensure that your article body delivers on the full promise the title offered.'

    Does this mean that URL I gave is not suggestive enough to lead onto the product I have been talking about? or that my article has not defined the product enough or has spoken too much on one area and is then not giving the whole picture of what is being offered ..and someone will have to look somewhere else to get more info on it? or have i missed something here.
    My other articles have been accepted.

    thanks for the help so far btw. all the help has been excellent!
     
    HarfynnTeuport, Apr 6, 2009 IP
  2. terryd

    terryd Well-Known Member

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    They don't like it if you break and article into 2 parts and you tell the reader "to read the second part of this article visit the site below", so anything that tells the reader that they have to go to another site to get more information will get rejected.

    Your better off giving them a good article and then in the resource box tell them that there is more good information at the site below etc....
     
    terryd, Apr 6, 2009 IP
  3. tibor28

    tibor28 Peon

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    Basically you promised something in the title of your article which you did not give in the article. Instead you told the readers to go to another website to read what you promised them in the title. I hope you get me.
     
    tibor28, Apr 6, 2009 IP
  4. HarfynnTeuport

    HarfynnTeuport Peon

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    I get you. Thanks. So, what you offer is the title must be in the article and the article steers toward the product without making a sales pitch.
     
    HarfynnTeuport, Apr 7, 2009 IP
  5. MedicAffiliate

    MedicAffiliate Peon

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    Some things I could recommend:
    1.More bullet points detailing features and benefits
    2.Stronger identification of the problem before hand, try building some sympathy with your reader through your story, as opposed to just recounting your suffering.
    3.Better prose for your copy...it just doesnt flow well when you read it and hopefully someone you know can correct it.

    Overall, it looks okay and provided you could motivate some affiliates, you have a nice launch on your hands. Also remember, if you can't recruit affiliates-make them.

    Good luck ;)
     
    MedicAffiliate, Apr 7, 2009 IP