Rate this Logo Please

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Be Different, Aug 31, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi all

    I am new to Graphics filed. I have made a logo recently. Please give me your feedback about this logo. thanks
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    Last edited: Aug 31, 2009
    Be Different, Aug 31, 2009 IP
  2. b15ginz

    b15ginz Peon

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    #2
    i would change the font.
     
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  3. fabuluousman

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    #3
    your logo about what.maybe you can change the icon at the middle with more colourful.
    However keep your good work.
     
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  4. b15ginz

    b15ginz Peon

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    #4
    i wouldnt do too much more color. maybe a different layout of that logo would be best. that font just screams vampire and the logo screams modern/caring/love
     
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  5. zenaire

    zenaire Peon

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    #5
    First comment on your work yourself and then ask..If u ask me I would say the icons color and the word JIYA color if different (not so closer) it would be better.. and the head means black ball can be different color..
    Don't wana mess up try and I know you could do better..
    would love to see improvements
     
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  6. jeneliawatson

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    #6
    Its look Different ..I like it.......but I need better satisfaction.......
     
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  7. Exa

    Exa Active Member

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    #7
    Adding on to what others have already said,

    The black 'head' looks too detached from the entire logo. Also placement and perspective of the dot makes the man's position look rather awkward. Play with the positions abit more :D
     
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  8. webdire

    webdire Active Member

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    #8
    looks great simplicity reflects in the clean design
     
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  9. pipes

    pipes Prominent Member

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    #9
    Its not easy to read.
     
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  10. thepunnisher87

    thepunnisher87 Well-Known Member

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    #10
    you need to put icon of the logo at left side rathar than middle of the texts. and also change font.. try to put some gradient effects and make more 2.0 look.
     
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    #11
    I can't read it, I do like the colours though just maybe not the font
     
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  12. FreakySteve

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    #12
    The typeface is little too gothy for a design company, imho.

    I would also suggest getting rid of the black in exchange for another color. It looks off balance with the first word in black and the other colored. If you're going to use black, use that as your one-color version and then do a colored version for other circumstances.
     
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  13. Norebbo

    Norebbo Active Member

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    #13
    Too confusing. Am I correct in that it says "Just Jiya"? And what is the stylized graphic of the golfer supposed to represent?
     
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  14. COBSolutions

    COBSolutions Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Change the color of the icon in the middle to something different from both the other colors, then this logo should rock....excellent work mate
     
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    #15
    nice 1 but change the colour
     
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  16. BSTMS

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    #16
    Sorry I dont really care for it... too swirly..
     
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  17. RobertK

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    #17
    I'm not sure what it's about but first impressions are of dancing - is that right? The icon in the middle looks like a dancing thing - a bit like the lucas arts logo - plus the J's look like feet. Not sure about the typeface - a little too different if you get my meaning. Plus a little too hard to read - I think a logo should be legible first and foremost - therefore a clearer font is needed. I do like the work put into it though - vectors - and i'm guessing you created those letters yourself? Not seen that font before.
     
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  18. XxSCaRFaCExX

    XxSCaRFaCExX Active Member

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    #18
    photoshop?
     
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  19. Be Different

    Be Different Active Member

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    Thanks friends for your feedback :) I have changed the font as most of the friends suggested. Sorry I did not mention the background of the logo its was made for my friend who is looking to start a women clothing line
     
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  20. johnab2112

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    #20
    2/10, Actually you did nothing to it. Just the font is good one.
     
    johnab2112, Sep 2, 2009 IP