If there are any secret ingredients or spices that need to be added to this landing page please let me know... How to build your own solar panel
I think the green font text has to go..... Stick with the professional black & white. The Order Now button text should be Add To Cart button with Blueish background - Dan Thies did an experiment on it....
I think you should really shorten this lander, and direct them to the actual sales page, rather than the checkout. You'll probably see more conversions that way. And I agree - the green font has got to go. Seems a bit cluttered too. Just stick with a simple description and review the product. Help answer the visitors problem, then direct them to the sales letter. If you can hype them enough in your LP, trust me - They will shoot directly for the order button on the sales page anyway.
You guys are awesome thanks for the nitty gritty. Change the font color good tip. Okay but what do you mean by "direct to the actual sales page... Rather than checkout..." Also how would you shorten it? I will change the button too.
I think I must have missed something here.... Is this YOUR product or a product you're an affiliate for? I guess when I just saw that this was a review for a landing page, I automatically assumed that you created this lander for a product. With so many "energy" products in the CB marketplace, I mearly thought that you were an affiliate for one of them. If this is your sales page, it needs tons of work, honestly. At least hire someone for a better design and layout. It's just too cluttered, and doesn't look anything like a sales page. Also, take a look at your competition to see what they are doing right, and try to do it better (if you can). Good luck!
Yeah, I'd suggest expanding on your sales page since it sure looks like you are the publisher. If you aren't the publisher, your affiliate link doesn't show you as the affiliate.
Dam* Yes, I am the publisher... So the site looks cheap? Arggg... Sometimes I want to toss in the towel.. I threw this site together but thought it would pull through. Then again I am new to CB. The D-load and stuff works as it is functional... Maybe I'll head to elance to hire someone to push out a page... Little discouraged but I'll grab this one by the horns. What would you do if this was your page... How would you do it? Just curious. IF you guys have been in the business I'd rather hear it from folks with expirience.. -SSgt Peterson
Also, register a separate domain for your product. The main page of your domain shows a blog with adsense. Affiliates won't want their traffic to leak out to the main page.
The page looks good. The double hyphen domain......no so sure Try this advancedsolarpanels.com or this diysolarpanels.com diy = do it yourself
Your opening headline is wrong too. Don't let utility a company steal your earned pay! should be Don't let a utility company, steal your hard earned pay!
too cluttered, color is horrible...pay a designer 20 bucks for a professional looking logo. Good idea though...keep at it
Unlike a lot of the folk here, I don't think it's half bad. You need to focus more on a few specific colrs and make it a bit lighter on the eyes, but past that it's well done... GET RID OF THE GREEN TEXT BLOCKS and that'll be 90% of the changes you need to make. Past that, you have pictures, lists, and everything else that make potential customers warm and fuzzy inside. Good work.
Err wrong, that comma doesn't belong *at all*. "Don't let a utility company steal your hard earned cash!" is probably better, cash sounds a bit more "valuable" per se, pay sounds kind of... idk, bland, boring. Just my opinion, but sure as hell that comma doesn't belong there.
GRRRRRR. I paid a dude on elance to do my LP... It's better than what it used to be... I personally think it really blows... I should just do it in plain old black and white.... Plane jane with blue links and that's it...
I think you need to get the main content centered. The buy button looks wierd in there ..just my opinion