[RATE PLEASE] Computer Repair Shop Site

Discussion in 'Design' started by mikeads66, Feb 20, 2013.

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    http://www.bayareapcrepair.com (will get a new domain eventually)

    Site was designed to be very small and simple, yet convey the most critical information to the visitor. Going to be used mainly with adwords, unlikely to be used for SEO.
     
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  2. Med Gfx

    Med Gfx Member

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    #2
    nice design
     
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  3. qwikad.com

    qwikad.com Illustrious Member Affiliate Manager

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    I like the fact that the edge of the laptop and the xbox are sticking out. Gives the site a professional touch. There's not much too critique. Nicely designed.
     
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  4. _J2_

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    Overall a nice clean site and could work as-is. A few areas you might want to think about though.

    1 - "fixlaptop" seems a little "foreigner engrish" for a name. Fix Your Laptop could make it more personal. Some other thoughts that come to mind are "Genius Laptop Repair" or WeFixLaptops. Just some thoughts. I like the logo design.

    2 - I like the idea of the laptop with the green virus warning on it, and it looks clean and everything. I just thought when first loading the page that MY computer was infected (I went to a bad site), that Google was warning me it was a bad site, or it was a "your computer may be infected, buy this AV software" kind of ad. None of which makes me feel confident to stick on the page. Perhaps moving it to another area of the page so it's not the first thing we see?

    3 - the PS3 and Xbox seem to be merged together as a solid chunk of black plastic, and the white ipad doesn't stand out very well against the white background.

    Like I said before, overall it's a clean site and none of this is terrible, just some thoughts.

    Hopefully this is helpful. Thanks.
     
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  5. globegenius

    globegenius Active Member

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    Looks good but you could do a few things to help the search engines find it. Your title tag is only 2 words. Should be 3 at least so bots know what the site is about.
    You have no meta description.
    None of your images have alt tags (description)
    Do a 301 redirect to combine your www and "naked" URL.
    Good luck with it.
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    globegenius, Feb 26, 2013 IP
  6. Stephan_Iscoe

    Stephan_Iscoe Well-Known Member

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    Overall, nice job!
    Since you're using Adwords, I'd think about making your headline
    match the ad that get's the most click-thru...eg
    "No Fix - No Pay Guarantee." Rather than the $79 flat fee...
    another trick is to plug in the exact search term.




    Best of Success, S.
     
    Stephan_Iscoe, Mar 1, 2013 IP