Just set up a new Squidoo page was wondering i can get some thoughts on it. Feel free to be honest wont hurt my feeling. http://www.squidoo.com/lensmaster/new_workshop/how-to-work-from-home-legit-online-jobs
I think this should be his URL www.squidoo.com/how-to-work-from-home-legit-online-jobs He copied it while editing. Tony, I think you should pay more attention to capital letters where they are due, like in titles. Break paragraphs into more short ones. Move table of contents to the top or even better remove it since you already have one. Move the guestbook to the bottom as the last module. Move Amazon and e-bay apart. One important thing to consider. If you are having any affiliate links in this lens and you hope people will click on them and make you money, remove all the distractions like amazon and e-bay. And about hurting your feelings, no need to, the lens is good By the way, I am just giving suggestions based on what usually "sells better".
Thanks B.Pit for the input towards my squidoo lens, i plan on fixing it up tonight hopefully. Sorry about the URL mix up the URL is http://www.squidoo.com/how-to-work-from-home-legit-online-jobs
I have from your site, and I look very nice ... it's just that there are some that must be added trending topics on your site