I think pictures of people are much more attractive, if the person in the photo does not look directly to the camera. So pic #1 is way more interesting in my opinion. But I'd get rid of those distracting... things (whatever) in the background, add a little contrast, soften the black and add a little sepia all over. Like this:
Probably the second one. It has more to it, so to speak. The first would be better if it was cropped though
Is it you or someone else If the person in Snaps is you your self why dont you go in Modelling .. Sure you can beat Jackie Chan