Rate My Motion Graphic Spectogram!

Hey,

I recently created an audio levels driven spectrogram logo motion graphic and was hoping I could get some feedback from the community!

Below is the Vimeo link in 720p HD =)
http://vimeo.com/2996537

Thanks,
Josh

 

wow. how long have you been to this business pal? ar u a pro, hobbyist?

 

it looks cool, you might consider adding a delayed spectrum and particle work in it.

 

Did you use any template?
You know what, this might be your talent and you'll earn profit for it, man.
Go! Go! Go! I want to see more of your works.

 

wow looks amazing pal, keep up this kind of work up 8/10

 

looks pretty basic.

 

It Looks pretty coool.. man, Keep it Up!

 

Very fundamental stuff but it was ok and frankly light years better than most work of that ilk on DP hence, nicely done.

Nigel

 

looks good

 

Nice job, josh!!

 

the sound track doesnt blow enough. and the spectogram appears to miss the beats on the last few samples

 

that is really awesome.

 

That was really neat. One thought occurred and of course I'm not this excelled in video production but perhaps have one of the words centered and coming from 'within' the audio trace, (as if it were the sound itself)? I work a lot on branding and having the elements together might aid visually - again just a thought. Great work as is either way

 

Hey,

Thanks everyone. I'm going to try and reply to everyone in one post, this may be hard haha but here i go.
@faust1611, e-fun, S-Tan, Nigel Lew, zzealouss, bz1406, and gurtejm4eo: Thanks!! I'm still in school, have done a few freelancing jobs, no templates ever used by me, yes it was fundamental but it was also just something i threw together before the client even told me what they wanted exactly.

@A_Aygun: delay the spectrum? thats easy enough, and I actually concidered this, but I didnt feel like changing it since I knew I was in to remake it in the end anyways. And what do you mean by particle work? The entire spectorgram is actually particles. I thought adding particles in the BG would make it too busy and take away from the rest of the content (in paticular, the text).

@ m-powa: dont like the sound track? I just grabbed it from my stock audio to quickly throw this together, in the new version (which I'll post), I was supplied an audio track.

@oz.: Integrating the spectrogram and text together? Thats an interesting idea.

As for an update, I remade the whole thing for the client.
Link:
http://vimeo.com/3261563

Tell me what you think of this one!!

And P.S. if anyone is in need of a motion graphic freelancer send me a PM! I'd be happy to help!