Hello, I am by far not a graphics designer. Just a chick, starting a new blog. I came up with this logo. What can I do better?
The motto should have less emphasis than the title of the business/blog/website/etc and you can achieve that by having a thinner, more basic font for the motto. Just my opinion; overall I like it.
Put Bot Saver above the logo on 1 line. Then, to the right of the logo, put "earn and save" each on one line You can actually get rid of the rest of the text all together as it does not aid the logo the least bit. Bot Saver - Earn & SAVE and that is all the text you need. You can add the motto on the site where you put the logo in text format.
I totally agree with Adrian, Bot Saver + Earn and Save works well enough for the logo. That phrase should be somewhere on the site instead, just not on the logo. Besides, logo should be just a logo. Anyway, it is cool and a little retouch will do.
It looks too busy and visually meaning less. It lacks a graphical structure. I would put BOT on the second line and remove the text at the bottom
Yeah, way too much text. However - I see an opportunity to have the robot arm actually holding the "BOT SAVER" text, as opposed to be just touching it the way it is now.
Just had another thought as I hit the reply button. I'm not really sure that the robot arm is working - it could be just a simple robot icon (similar to Android's Bot), with "BOT SAVER" text integrated into it's chest. Or how about a robot wearing a life vest...
Yes, that 2 lines of text at the bottom are excess. And an ampersand symbol in this font looks a bit strange.
Its so crowd, I suggest to move Bot Saver under this machine and center it, I think no need for the dollar "S" . Then write the slogan witn small bold size under BOT SAVER. Good Luck
I like the robot arm but I think its too convoluted. Maybe change the typeface of the statement so that you could distinguish the name of the company or business from the logo.