Rate my Landing Page - Free Graphics

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  1. #1
    I'm offering free web 2.0 graphics that will be on CB or another network, depending if CB accepts it or not.

    freeweb20graphics.com/testingindex.htm (don't have enough posts for live links)

    The whole process isn't complete, all I have so far is the landing sales page. I still need to implement a few offers after filling out your name/email.

    *NOTE* Please don't fill out anything on the bottom of the page, it's not complete and you're not going to get anything yet :D

    What do you guys think of the layout, design, and the niche?

    Feedback welcome!

    Thanks,
    Danny
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  2. mercuryyy

    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    I would give it 9/10 really great job, i didnt like the 3D box, so that the 1/10.

    How about sending me the free Grafics ah ? +:D
     
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  3. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    #3
    Thanks for the comment, appreciate it. I'll PM you as soon as the site's up and ready.

    Danny
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
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    #4
    very nice graphics
     
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  5. grover69

    grover69 Peon

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    #5
    Page looks really great and I love the graphics. Should make any page stand out a bit. Sign me up for any graphics you are sending out for free!
     
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  6. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    #6
    I got you down too grover69, thanks for all the comments.

    Any negative points on my page that may not convert someone?

    Danny
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  7. grover69

    grover69 Peon

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    Truthfully? OK, two things and you may not want to hear it but everything helps. The 3d box is kinda hokey. And this one is even funnier: you need to shave in your picture! :)
     
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  8. grover69

    grover69 Peon

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    #8
    Oh and the cursive font at the bottom could be more legible. Seriously love the graphics though. Good job!

    And I just noticed that you have a typo here:
    "You will literally save hours of time simply by using out free web 2.0 graphics by copying and pasting them where you want them to be!"

    should be our not out!
     
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  9. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    Thanks grover69 for your comments, really do appreciate it.. and everyone's as well. I fixed the typo, oops! :)

    Danny
     
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  10. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    Question... since everyone's not to hot on the graphics box.... would a smaller version work better, or perhaps maybe like a flat ebook cover or a cd or something?

    Any tips on that aspect? (or just get rid of the box)

    Danny
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  11. grover69

    grover69 Peon

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    I'd say just get rid of the box. I'm not sure if it is even necessary.
     
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    #12
    Love the graphics

    Sign me up for the graphics!
     
    Alibubble, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  13. nadavs

    nadavs Active Member

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    #13
    Count me in for those graphics! It looks amazing!
    I can already see where they fit in my website.

    The box is really weird looking, and I'm not too sure either whether it's necessary or not. The rest is very good.

    nadavs
     
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  14. grover69

    grover69 Peon

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    Sorry dude, get the box has to go! :) Its all good, at least we good to help before you launched.
     
    grover69, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  15. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    #15
    Definitely, I've removed the box

    I left the bottom box, much smaller... hopefully it looks better
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  16. GreatWebSuccess

    GreatWebSuccess Peon

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    Here's another landing page that I Just finished up now, let me know what you think:

    l-o-s-e-weight.com
     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 3, 2008 IP
  17. sglord

    sglord Active Member

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    #17
    The box is really too big and it looks weird. Try to do something about it. It really turns me off when I first land on the page and see a weird looking huge box there. Also try to get your message across above the fold. It will be better.

    Anything else looks great except the box.
     
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  18. Tobidotman

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    #18
    lol it was so good i tried to sign up, some real great graphics there please pm me when the site is up!
     
    Tobidotman, Jun 4, 2008 IP
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    #19
    Awesome looking site, and the look is original please pm me when it is ready, those graphics will come in handy!
     
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  20. GreatWebSuccess

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    #20
    I thought I had overwritten the testingindex.htm file, guess I didn't. It's changed now and the box is definitely gone, just have the smaller version towards the very bottom of the page.

     
    GreatWebSuccess, Jun 4, 2008 IP