Well, the background doesnt work in FireFox and you need to get rid of all those bottles of fish Oil. That is a little too much for my taste. Also, You need to take all the content on the top of the page and move it down because it looks funny. I would take the links on the side and put bullets next to them instead of centering them or something. These are just a few of my thoughts. Good luck with it!
The header needs serious help, and you should make your font consistent. You also have way too much content than I think any one would ever read on a home page. There are really too many things going on this site to mention. There are a lot of mistakes. You have links that don't match the title of the pages you link to, and you used that same omega 3 bottle picture 15 different times on the same page!
camp185 your right I need to add more pages too" this was just to get the message out about my fish oil products thanks its working though I have pr 3 and the products sell well on ebay I did subcribe to your feeds"" kudos
I would totally remove the top header with the repeating background and the white text it ruins the whole page. If you remove it will look much "tighter" and professional.
I would work on your consistency. Not only in the fonts (but that too) but in the way you lay your information out. I would say everything needs to look more organized and in place. Also the backgrounds look pretty bad in Firefox and try to add some styling to your main text. Because as I can see you added styling to your header and sidebar and everything but your main text looks like it has no CSS styling. Looks pretty plain. Sorry if I seem a little too blunt with the review. Just trying to help Keep it up, don't forget to post us updates, we would love to see them
I think you will do better without the header. The text on the colorful header has high chance of being ignore by visitors because of the difficulty to read, so there's no point wasting that space on the upper fold. Might as well use that precious space to better capture visitors attention. On top of that, text seem to be all over the place, makes the page looks messy and disorganize. I would suggest adding border or something to differentiate the different sections. Just my humble opinions.
First thing, as others have stated, is to remove that hideous header, it would benefit much more if you made the picture of the woman jumping as the header, as it has a much more cleaner feel. Also, I think you need some hierarchy in your content, at the moment, everything is just times new roman and very close in size, you need headers to BE headers, so for that i'd suggest you raise the size of the headers, and possibly change the font to Arial or Georgia to make it easier to distinguish between headers and content. Also, not that this has to do with the design itself, I think you should remove "Omega-3 fatty acid" everywhere on the page, and replace it with "Omega-3 acid" or "Omega-3". the first thing that comes to mind when people hear 'fat' or 'fatty' is overweight and unhealthy, so it's probably not a good idea to have your product being thought of as unhealthy. but back to the design, the links could also do with color changes to fit in with the design more, as could headers, black + white with blue links makes for a very dull page. hope this helps
I give you 7.You should work more on the images and their places, the text and placement, and don-t put so many on 1 page, think about if u have 1000 visitors per day let-s say, and the page have 50-60 kbs or maybe more, it will be very difficult for your server to support that.