Quick review on what I've got so far

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ICE_monky, Jan 15, 2009.

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  2. thehustler

    thehustler Active Member

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    Well as far as the site, I would use a little more color for a band and the first paragraph is hard to read as being so long and not broken up. As an seo stanpoint I can't give suggestions as most of what I need to see isnt finished, but it is a nice looking site, just not something I would remember for long.
     
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    kingofsanda Peon

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    The site has a unique look and feel to it, it looks good, for seo purposes you should add
    a unique title to the page and break up the text in the first paragraph into multiple
    paragraphs to make it more legible.
     
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    jj1 Active Member

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    I would make the photo a full screen width so that your photo and unique navigation really hit you. Break up the text with headings and subheadings. Maybe have a coupe of small visuals lower down the screen.
     
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    You use the second scroll bar for SHOWS, it's ugly. You can use Javascript up/down arrows or click this link to read more ...
     
    cheapez, Jan 16, 2009 IP