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Quality of my articles?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by saros, Oct 28, 2008.

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    I am not a profession copy writer, but I am trying to start a website based on the bailout and America's financial crisis and was wondering what some of you thought about the content on my site.

    There is still a lot to write and obviously the content hasn't been completely edited, but I was hoping to get some advice or tips based on my writing.

    The site is bailoutpeople(dot)com

    Thanks~
     
    saros, Oct 28, 2008 IP
  2. latoya

    latoya Active Member

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    That's a good, timely topic and the posts you've already written are interesting.

    The writing isn't terrible and it's better than some I've seen, but it could be better. Tightening up your language would make the writing a lot better. Right now, it's unnecessarily wordy.
     
    latoya, Oct 28, 2008 IP