Push Up Test Review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by MattEvers, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. #1
    I just uploaded my site: Push Up Test.

    I am not done, since the new year hasn't come yet (if you read it, you will see what I mean). But I would like some recommendations.

    Thanks, Matthew
     
    MattEvers, Dec 28, 2005 IP
  2. strivinglife

    strivinglife Peon

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    Okay, not what I thought it was going to be about. ;)

    * How about this for an inital paragraph instead?

    "Welcome to Push Up Test! This site is designed to show the results of a test of how push ups, along with other diet and exercise, can change body composition and overall health in one year's time. Read About the Push Up Test to get all the details!"

    The bold could still use a wordsmith - a test is implied by 'results'.

    * /contact.html - Font change on purpose?

    * I'm one who'd say 'remove the links for the months that you don't have content for', as you can tell, because I've said it ;)

    * You need some alt text for the image. And while you're at it, you may as well add a title attribute too ;)

    * Do you really need to have a heading that big, on all of the pages?

    I'd trim down the image in the header, and do something different with the right side of the heading. Personally, I'd see what a layout like:

    Heading
    ---------------
    Body | Months

    Just trim down the heading - that's way too much to scroll on. (They say to still work with 800x600, and at that resolution I see a couple sentences of your first paragraph in Firefox).

    * Last one, /advertise.html

    Any way to put this into a list? I see a big paragraph and I stop. Reading it, I see a number of things that could be 'listified'.

    ~jk
     
    strivinglife, Dec 28, 2005 IP
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  3. MattEvers

    MattEvers Notable Member

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    I appreciate it - thanks for taking time to give your opinion. A lot noted, and probably changed after your review. Thanks again.
     
    MattEvers, Dec 28, 2005 IP