Hi all, I have posted a squidoo Lens with amazon products related to the niche that I have selected. Please could you please give me any feedback on this squidoo lens as I am looking to make a lot more and promoting different products for amazon and just wanted to know your honest opinion. http://www.squidoo.com/making-it-as-a-dj Will be looking forward to your response.
Hey albag, I'm only getting into IM myself so I have no experience with squidoo lenses, however, I can give you my feedback as a casual visitor to the site. Generally it looks okay, and if I was thinking of going into DJ'ing I'd probably read through the article just to gain information, however I don't think I'd go ahead and buy. The article has a kind of generic feel to it, somewhat as if it was automatically generated. I would suggest giving it a re-write with a more personal feel, something that would make a newcomer feel connected to you. As an example, reading your post above is different from the post on the lens. The Lens post feels cold and impersonal. Anyway, that's my two cents. Hoepfully its been beneficial! Cheers, Len
Are they your amazon links under words "Some good starter packages for DJ's." If yes, i should try to have it on Squidoo
Your command of the english language is pretty poor. Your thoughts are coherent, it's not like you weren't making sense, but your writing style and word choice is bland and boring.
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Personally I would recommend you setup your own website, the reason I would say this is because squidoo still needs to approve your lenses before the put it live on their own network, also once you have built up your site and have some money coming in you can sell the site at somewhere like flippa if you like. It takes a little more time to set up, and maybe $10 for a domain name, but at least you retain control and keep all the profits for yourself.
I just checked out your lense, that's not an amazon product lense is it? was the point of posting the question to get some traffic over to the lense? I'm not being critical, if so it was quite clever.
I know I am new here, but not new to IM. I thought your lens was ok..nothing reached out and grabbed me. You might want to check with Squidoo's guidelines and make sure you have enough modules..my memory isn't working too well right now, but I think I remember reading somewhere that you are supposed to have 5, I can't be positive though. It should be in that health check thing that they have. Another thing I couldn't really figure out is what keyword phrase are you trying to target? Making it as a DJ? One thing I know about Squidoo is that if you pick your keyword phrase wisely, name your lens the phrase and make it your url then sprinkle the phrase throughout, use your keyword phrase in your hyperlink, you will get on the 1st page of Google. Several of mine have been stuck there for a few years now, and each time I check, they are still there. I hope that is helpful.
oh, another thing, you need shorter paragraphs, no more than 3 sentences. Use bullets anywhere you can, make it easy for people to skim, because they don't read, they skim.