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Contest Private Contest - Improve Existing Logo $15

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by untitledstudios, Dec 15, 2017.

  1. #1
    Hello designers! I need your help once again.

    This time I want your help in improving an existing logo for a community that helps people live happier and healthier. Here it is:

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    The problem:
    I really like the logo. However, the problem is that it's way off balance. As you can see, there are 3 parts to it, the butterfly, the main text and then the ".org" at the end. All of this makes it very off balance and hard to use on anything. The G for example drags the entire logo down, while parts of the butterfly extend it up and to the left. Also there are two different fonts going on which further makes it off balance.

    What to keep:
    So I'd like to keep the color, the idea of a butterfly made from leaves, and the general pleasant look, but I'd like to make it more symmetrical and balanced. So it can be easily used in small spaces such as web headers or easily centered on T-shirts.
    SEMrush
    Include 1 version with .org and one without. Both should look good.

    $15 to the winner. Contest closes in 72 hours. Thanks for participating!

    Contest is limited to the people invited:

    @Sabit Rustemov
    @puttu
    @web_72
    @tosario
    @dikoka
    @logos4all
    @getdomain4u
    @Athisa
    @DianaGy
    @FlashD
    @guideline
    @Gorgon
    @galalogo
    @MADLINA
    @Kic3
    @3SS
    @irah-
    @coolwanz
    @katesrobyn
    @Mr.Nag
    @gibblet
     
    untitledstudios, Dec 15, 2017 IP
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    SEMrush
  2. Untidy

    Untidy Member

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    #2
    :( Could I not also participate?
     
    Untidy, Dec 15, 2017 IP
  3. Altruist Design

    Altruist Design Greenhorn

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    #3
    Why is your contest limited to those invited?
     
    Altruist Design, Dec 15, 2017 IP
  4. getdomain4u

    getdomain4u Well-Known Member

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    #4
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    Last edited: Dec 16, 2017
    getdomain4u, Dec 16, 2017 IP
  5. Athisa

    Athisa Well-Known Member

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    #5
    1o1.png
     
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    web_72 Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Here are my designs,

    Design 1
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    Version 2

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    Feedback Appreciated.
     
    web_72, Dec 17, 2017 IP
  7. 3SS

    3SS Well-Known Member

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    #7
    [​IMG]
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    3SS, Dec 18, 2017 IP
  8. logos4all

    logos4all Well-Known Member

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    #8
    [​IMG]
     
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  9. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Thank you for the entries so far. I have a few requests to extend the contest by a few days so I will do that. If you haven't entered, please submit your entry within the next 2 days.

    In the meantime here's the feedback:

    @tosario (PM entry)

    I like the entry without the .org, but the "i" without the dot looks strange and the .org version doesn't look good.

    @getdomain4u I like the overall look and feel of this. I love the butterfly, however, once you down size it, some details of the butterfly get lost. Maybe try to make those tiny parts a bit thicker? Not sure about the .org version. The ".org" looks a bit out of place, since the Organics is way more italicized here.

    @web_72 I like it but the text feels too plain. Couldn't see this being used as a brand. It is way more balanced than our current logo, however.

    @3SS sorry, I am not liking either one of these.

    @Athisa I'm not liking this, it doesn't look like you read my requirements. It's not using our butterfly concept, and it's actually even more off balance than our current logo.

    @logos4all Interesting. I do like this, but I'm not sure how I feel about the text. Feels a bit rough and not a big fan of the G and the CS connection. I would try other fonts.
     
    untitledstudios, Dec 18, 2017 IP
  10. logos4all

    logos4all Well-Known Member

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    #10
    Thanks for the feedback, Some font variations.

    [​IMG]
     
    logos4all, Dec 18, 2017 IP
  11. getdomain4u

    getdomain4u Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Thank you for your feedback. Please check the revision.

    [​IMG]
     
    Last edited: Dec 18, 2017
    getdomain4u, Dec 18, 2017 IP
  12. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #12
    Contest is closed, apologies for delay! I will update the winner soon. If anyone needs to make any last minute changes do so by tonight.
     
    untitledstudios, Dec 27, 2017 IP
  13. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #13
    I have chosen the entry via pm by @tosario. Congrats! Thanks everyone for entering.
     
    untitledstudios, Dec 28, 2017 IP
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  14. tosario

    tosario Active Member

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    #14
    Hi,

    Thanks for choosing my design.

    PM Sent
     
    tosario, Dec 29, 2017 IP