Poster design

I'm helping a friend create a welcome poster for a local NHS unit, and would appreciate any tips or help anyone could offer. The poster shows a basic introduction to the unit, and what patients can expect. The unit wants to show this as a kind of pathway/journey, but without this being obvious or cheesy. Does anyone have any comments or criticism on my current design?

It's not complete, and the blank spaces will be filled with pictures, but I was wondering if anyone could give me any hints.



All the best

 

Hmmm,

Your endpoint (goal) should always be at the right, preferably in the top right corner (positive). Try rearrange in a circular pattern. Apart from that, its a good start but its really impossible to say until the pictures are there. It has potential to look great and potential to be a big clutter.

 

I think I would make it more structured, rather than flowy like it is.

 

Road design would better with red green and orange bulettins.

 

change the yellow BG !

 

I like it.... just try changing the yellow bg with a light blue or whitish tone..

 

try adobe.kuler.com for getting better color combinations.. Also if you search in Google for such designs, you may get inspiration