Was able to see it only in another browser, odd. Like this one. Can you work on the "blood money" that's there right now? It spoils the elegant feeling. Also, what would a footer look like?
I honestly don't know. It just doesn't look elegant as a whole. Maybe it's just me. As if the style isn't defined.
Yes I like the colors and love the eye. It gives a mesmerizing effect. However, it just doesn't look elegant as a whole.
What exactly do you mean by "work" on them? Do you want me to remove them, or what? Please explain. I will work on the footer also.
OK. Here's my revised version as you requested. Please let me know if anything else is needed. If that link doesn't work, try this direct link: http://i45.tinypic.com/2qclchf.jpg Please let me know what you think. Bishop PS. Here is 12 PM so if i don't answer in 15 minutes max, it means i'm sleeping with my head on the keyboard, lol.
Ok, great entries from the both of you today. I will let this thread run for another day, if nobody else enters, will have to choose one of you Good work guys, good night for now.
Without the white background on the sales letter it just doesn't look good. I am not a designer, but it just doesn't have any sense of style.