Poetry...

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by Finale, Nov 29, 2006.

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    Well, I had to write this for my literature class.

    'note, I am not a poet, so don't be brutal.'

    What do you think? It's a sonnet..=D
     
    Finale, Nov 29, 2006 IP
  2. DFischer

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    That's pretty good, good job :)
     
    DFischer, Nov 29, 2006 IP
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    That's good one Finale. So why were you asked to write this sonnet? Is it an assignment? :D
     
    jdR!pper, Nov 30, 2006 IP
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    iul Well-Known Member

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    it's quite good specially for an amateur. Keep up the good work, maybe someday you'll turn into a pro and make a living out of it
     
    iul, Nov 30, 2006 IP