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    Sherlock, Jul 25, 2006 IP
  2. chachacallis

    chachacallis Well-Known Member

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    its nice and simply and neat but why is there a huge white space at the top.
     
    chachacallis, Jul 25, 2006 IP
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    I think remove the white space on the top and maybe find some ad to fill up the lower right corner
     
    walaboom, Jul 25, 2006 IP
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    #4
    The ads really stand out as ads especially with the borders. You might want to consider removing the borders to see if it improves.

    The top portion should not have white space. You might want to make it an image ad on the top right instead. Also you can have some text at the top right to briefly describe what your site is about. This can help the search engine understand your site better too.
     
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    The adverts look a bit out of place, try making them more part of the site like they are incorporated, this may also help your income as people think of them as site links. You could also try centering the page for larger resolutions.
     
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    In the first impression I did not realize that the site is about mobile phones... Try to modify the logo in a way that it looks like a mobile...
    The menu text is too tight for me, is difficult to read it, try to lighten the lines between..
     
    Giber, Jul 25, 2006 IP
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    exactly, you have a very nice and well designed and organized site but that huge white space at the top makes the site look bad

    it takes away valueable space above the fold, fix it and it will look much nicer

    hey why don't you have a title for most of your pages. your titles are new page 1, new page 2, etc. you should fix that ASAP
     
    timothy104, Jul 25, 2006 IP
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    Looks very nice. Only thing is the white spots at the top and right.
     
    Flash1, Jul 26, 2006 IP
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    The UI is not very intuitive. Like make the Main menu font bigger, make it stand out.

    Currently everything is of the same size, same color, its difficult to say what to do next?

    My 2 cents
     
    ForAnu, Jul 26, 2006 IP
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    Hello,

    I agree with everyone above: fix the whitespace. Shrink the bacteria image, which I really like acutally, and place the site name before or after it instead of below. Either that or move the bigger center boxes next to the logo on the top.

    "Cell software" not "softwares". That drives me insane! :eek:

    In all the center boxes make the title and image links also. Check the CSS, too. After clicking the font changes size and screws up the box size.

    Get consistent with your link underlining.

    Align your boxes evenly and add a little space. It's too crowded.

    The images on the cell price page don't work. Are these affiliate links? If not, do it! This is the perfect site for CPA.

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    Good work so far,
    Ty
     
    tkroll, Jul 26, 2006 IP
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    but everyone is right, fix those huge white spaces. Overall the site looks great!
     
    Grim_Reaper, Jul 28, 2006 IP
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    My advices...

    1.The "white space" beetwen top of the page and main menu is just to big
    2. Try using google ads without border
    3. Try light blue or light gray background
     
    Lukaslo, Jul 28, 2006 IP