Plz review

Please review my sites :-
www.1world1family.co.cc
www.moneylancer.co.cc
and give feedback and suggestions.

 

Well, for one, it took a reallllllllllllllllly long time to load. I can't understand the title, but as for the design I like the clean and simple style.

 

Lol, placement is ok I guess, but I'd like to note that one of your google text ads reads simply "Path of God".

That is funny someone is advertising the path of god?

Anyways...keep at it, the load time was kind of long, about 5-6 seconds for me

 

I would put ad background the same as page background. Otherwise OK.

 

Instead of inserting the link unit between blog posts which is a hot spot, why not change it to ad unit instead? It takes two clicks to count/earn on link unit while there's only one required for ad units.

 

Put some adsense banner 468x60 on top just as an image ad. put some adsense of 200x200 on right side as image add . everything will be perfect .

Cheers!!!

 

You're right! The OP should place some Adsense to fill the blank areas. Make your sites for 1024X768 resolution and bring body to left for getting lots of spaces in right side. Here you can place some advertisements (may be paid), Google Adsense or you can display your recent posts and its links with short description to detail pages. It'll help Google to index your pages quickly and easily from your homepage.

 

wow...Both the sites are really worth to visit. I will revisit your site because I like your content. All the best!!!

 

You know there is a "review my site forum"

 

Actually very slow websites... need to be completely redesigned.

 

http://www.moneylancer.co.cc/

gave up after 2 mins for it to load your need to sort that out ssssssssssssooooooooooooo lllllllllooooooonnnnnngggggggg to load

 

I noticed the second "religion" link takes you to a totally separate website. Definitely should fix that....

 

you really should do something about the speed of the website..

 

The website loaded fairly quickly for me, however, I would say that the content was slightly long. I would suggest breaking up your content into shorter blurbs. This would allow you to have more content on your site, but in an organized fashion. When readers see a page that is full of text, which has not been broken down, it can be overwhelming, and honestly, most viewers won't stay to read the entire text unless they are at your site specifically for the information you provide.

Besides that, your site is nice.

 

Thanks your your suggestions and reply.