Think it looks too "pasticy" and gives a sense of cheapness from the 1990s - sorry if its harsh. Perhaps try to lower your effects and keep it more simple?
That is not harsh, these logos (if you can call them that) are some of the worst I have ever seen. To keep my criticism constructive: I think the idea is actually pretty good, take out the effects an d you may be left with a half decent logo. Good luck.
you should make your logo clearer than that there are a lot of unnecessary effects like bevel and emboss for example