Plz check my website..

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    Ruman, May 16, 2009 IP
  2. Xodus

    Xodus Guest

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    Ruman,
    Please understand this is constructive criticism.

    1. I would leave your site before it fully loaded - Your headline has a spelling error - oppertunities
    2. I could not understand what your site is about. If your focusing on English speaking visitors then please use proper English.
    3. As far as I could tell it is only one page with no information and only a few advertisements.

    My suggestion would be to put your idea into a business plan. Identify your target visitors, have a useful product or service to offer with a special difference from the competition.

    Hope that helps.
    Good luck,
    Danny
     
    Xodus, May 16, 2009 IP
  3. ttheman

    ttheman Banned

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    very nice site m8 i didnt really like the header
     
    ttheman, May 16, 2009 IP
  4. Ruman

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    #4
    Thanks for suggestion
     
    Ruman, May 16, 2009 IP
  5. Ruman

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    #5
    Also thanks
     
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  6. kingofsanda

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    I think you should get a more professional template for the site and add some
    graphics to the page.
     
    kingofsanda, May 16, 2009 IP
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    I agree. It could use a bit of color by adding a few images.
     
    HomeComputerGames, May 16, 2009 IP
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    sarirejo Well-Known Member

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    #8
    You should only put three adsense at one page.
    Good luck!
     
    sarirejo, May 16, 2009 IP
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    Well to be fair, the design out right sucks. The content is very plainly presented. Your using text for a logo.

    Nothing against you, but this site does need a lot of work.
     
    Host Storm, May 16, 2009 IP
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    You done a great job, nice site, good color combination.
     
    james2007, May 17, 2009 IP
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    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #11
    The title looks not so bright, try to make it as more dark with some other color like red,orange, etc. And also make the text into justify style, looks good..
     
    2advance, May 19, 2009 IP
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    U must personalize the site a little, use a different template and know what visitors you are targetting.
     
    webmasterh1, May 19, 2009 IP
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    The site looks too plain. Use another template or redesign it.
    I could not understand anything you were saying on the site. Revise it, and make sure that the people that will go to your site will understand what you're saying.
    good luck!
     
    .grey., May 19, 2009 IP
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    #14
    Add some more content or 'meat' to the site
     
    veracious, May 19, 2009 IP
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    #15
    Sample design. i like it. also great offer to earn $$$
     
    xceedbd, May 19, 2009 IP
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    #16
    The site looks plain and need to get professional template.
     
    netdriver788, May 20, 2009 IP
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    #17
    I like your logo. It's very nice mate.
     
    Johnscore, May 20, 2009 IP
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    #18
    seriously. get a better template.
     
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    #19
    Add some good logo with a good template, contents seems ok :)
     
    kenei, May 21, 2009 IP
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    i think adsense only allowed one link unit per page, and text over your banner is too shiny.
     
    chrone, May 21, 2009 IP