Plz Appraise My First Website

Discussion in 'Appraisals' started by Androidguru, Sep 12, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hi Members,

    I am a full time android apps developer and just create a minisite to promote my services.

    Can you please visit and let me know your review & appraise the Domain Name, Website Graphic etc.

    Please Visit:

    Android2Cash.com

    http://android2cash.com

    Thanks !!
     
    Androidguru, Sep 12, 2012 IP
  2. GMF

    GMF Well-Known Member

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    Oh god, another one of these sites....


    Feels like watching a bad shopping channel :p
     
    GMF, Sep 13, 2012 IP
  3. josephng

    josephng Peon

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    Androidguru,

    A lot of work needs to be done.

    In my opinion, graphically it is a sore to the eye. But that's not the worst. The worst is, the graphics you have loaded in your website tends to load slow (probably big file size). Mind you, I am using a broadband to load them.

    There are grammar mistakes also ('fingure'?)

    The sales page is not professionally done. You want to know how? Put yourself as a customer's shoe and go to this page yourself, does it attract you?

    A good sales page starts with:
    1) An irresistible offer. Yours starts with a very colourful jpg picture of the 'Android2cash' and only in the second page it shows the offer
    2) You don't show other people's problems in a more 'graphical' detail. You just mentioned things in general

    These are just few examples.

    Your product might be fantastic, but the sales page has much to improve.
     
    Last edited: Sep 13, 2012
    josephng, Sep 13, 2012 IP