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Pls Review My Site

Discussion in 'Design' started by starmon, Feb 29, 2012.

  1. #1
    hi all.

    I have site new.

    http://www.newdads.us

    Pls review my site. advice and criticism, so I need here. because I want to make this site better.

    Thanks
    SEMrush
     
    starmon, Feb 29, 2012 IP
    SEMrush
  2. Adelli

    Adelli Peon

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    First of all, I would improve the text format and have the texts ckecked for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, a general introduction into the site's topic would be nice so that the visitor knows what your site is about.
     
    Adelli, Feb 29, 2012 IP
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    #3
    You first tell what about the site .you decided site name with related content and improve your content quality.
     
    kousar, Mar 3, 2012 IP
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    #4
    try to get non standard wordpress theme that looks better than this one
    include image gallery in your posts
    on home page show only brief information about posts
    make a meny with all your posts
     
    kuzmanin, Mar 3, 2012 IP
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    I also agree that you need another wordpress theme. This one looks too "bloggy". The other thing you should do is emply a good writer, because your texts seem as if you were translating them through google. What's more - add some pictures or graphs. It's rather boring to read just the text...

    Nevetherless, your blog looks 'cosy'. Keep improving!
     
    Ella_Z., Mar 5, 2012 IP
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    Your starting was good but. After half page all words are written in a simple manner. I suggest you to make some points and then describe it.
     
    vickysharma513, Mar 5, 2012 IP
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    charls782 Well-Known Member

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    you can make it more attractive by applying background colour, add some points and description, add pictures.
     
    charls782, Mar 5, 2012 IP
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    Seems to be a blog. I like the header image. I think you can still organize the content better. Try different font styles, Try to add some relevant content/gadgets in the right side. And everything is fine and OK. all the best buddy.
     
    josefaryan, Mar 6, 2012 IP
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    Irfi0009 Banned

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    your work is so good but is collar is not good
     
    Irfi0009, Mar 7, 2012 IP
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    #10
    I don't like the standard wordpress theme, you should probably spend a few bucks in a nice theme.
     
    nekrosis, Mar 7, 2012 IP
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    Hi, The information is good but the template and page alignment need to be look at. I would also suggest that you do something with the header of the page
     
    james_watson, Mar 9, 2012 IP
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    #12
    Hi. I think there are some corrections you need to do to improve you site. First of all it’s about content. It’s very important moment in changing you page. Also, revise, please, you text corrections and text format. Overall, it’s good but a little simple.
     
    AlexandrBlinov, Mar 17, 2012 IP
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    AlisaRozzy Active Member

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    #13
    Good Website with containing good Google Page Rank.
     
    AlisaRozzy, Mar 19, 2012 IP
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    #14
    It's short and sweet and to the point.
     
    55chev, Mar 20, 2012 IP
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    #15
    Really nice, very clean, but you need to make your title more keyword relevant. Get creative! ;)
     
    Clandog, Mar 20, 2012 IP
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    addking Banned

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    #16
    nice background color, please update content and header,
     
    addking, Apr 11, 2012 IP
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    #17
    background color i have never seen before, nice work, give some time to header
     
    nena3, Apr 12, 2012 IP
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    #18
    Good site i like but do more
     
    Irfi0009, Apr 13, 2012 IP
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    I see an empty wordpress site???
     
    Only1James, Apr 18, 2012 IP
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    Simple and nice, I like it.
     
    Install, Apr 18, 2012 IP