hi all. I have site new. http://www.newdads.us Pls review my site. advice and criticism, so I need here. because I want to make this site better. Thanks
First of all, I would improve the text format and have the texts ckecked for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, a general introduction into the site's topic would be nice so that the visitor knows what your site is about.
You first tell what about the site .you decided site name with related content and improve your content quality.
try to get non standard wordpress theme that looks better than this one include image gallery in your posts on home page show only brief information about posts make a meny with all your posts
I also agree that you need another wordpress theme. This one looks too "bloggy". The other thing you should do is emply a good writer, because your texts seem as if you were translating them through google. What's more - add some pictures or graphs. It's rather boring to read just the text... Nevetherless, your blog looks 'cosy'. Keep improving!
Your starting was good but. After half page all words are written in a simple manner. I suggest you to make some points and then describe it.
you can make it more attractive by applying background colour, add some points and description, add pictures.
Seems to be a blog. I like the header image. I think you can still organize the content better. Try different font styles, Try to add some relevant content/gadgets in the right side. And everything is fine and OK. all the best buddy.
Hi, The information is good but the template and page alignment need to be look at. I would also suggest that you do something with the header of the page
Hi. I think there are some corrections you need to do to improve you site. First of all it’s about content. It’s very important moment in changing you page. Also, revise, please, you text corrections and text format. Overall, it’s good but a little simple.