Pls Review My Site

hi all.

I have site new.

http://www.newdads.us

Pls review my site. advice and criticism, so I need here. because I want to make this site better.

Thanks

 

First of all, I would improve the text format and have the texts ckecked for spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, a general introduction into the site's topic would be nice so that the visitor knows what your site is about.

 

You first tell what about the site .you decided site name with related content and improve your content quality.

 

try to get non standard wordpress theme that looks better than this one
include image gallery in your posts
on home page show only brief information about posts
make a meny with all your posts

 

I also agree that you need another wordpress theme. This one looks too "bloggy". The other thing you should do is emply a good writer, because your texts seem as if you were translating them through google. What's more - add some pictures or graphs. It's rather boring to read just the text...

Nevetherless, your blog looks 'cosy'. Keep improving!

 

Your starting was good but. After half page all words are written in a simple manner. I suggest you to make some points and then describe it.

 

you can make it more attractive by applying background colour, add some points and description, add pictures.

 

Seems to be a blog. I like the header image. I think you can still organize the content better. Try different font styles, Try to add some relevant content/gadgets in the right side. And everything is fine and OK. all the best buddy.

 

your work is so good but is collar is not good

 

I don't like the standard wordpress theme, you should probably spend a few bucks in a nice theme.

 

Hi, The information is good but the template and page alignment need to be look at. I would also suggest that you do something with the header of the page

 

Hi. I think there are some corrections you need to do to improve you site. First of all it’s about content. It’s very important moment in changing you page. Also, revise, please, you text corrections and text format. Overall, it’s good but a little simple.

 

Good Website with containing good Google Page Rank.

 

It's short and sweet and to the point.

 

Really nice, very clean, but you need to make your title more keyword relevant. Get creative!

 

nice background color, please update content and header,

 

background color i have never seen before, nice work, give some time to header

 

Good site i like but do more

 

I see an empty wordpress site???

 

Simple and nice, I like it.