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Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by cri8bat, Nov 18, 2008.

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    Hi all
    I ask this some time ago and since then I made changes
    pls. could you review it again :)

    http://www.eczemacuretoday.com

    any suggestion would be highly apreciated
    PS: do you think the colors are too bright?if so what colors should I use?
     
    cri8bat, Nov 18, 2008 IP
  2. brouwer

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    I find the bright turquoise painful to my eyes and the page contains a lot of spelling errors.

    Besides those it looks fine to me.

    I think this thread belongs in the Review Section.
     
    brouwer, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    Yes, the color of menu text and title is too bright and hard to read . It is common to use bright background and dark text , it is easy to read .
     
    justinlorder, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    yes I also posted on the webdesign review thread, but I needed an affiliate marketer to reviewe it as well :)
    could you pl.s tell me were did you spoted spelling errors?

    so what color do you suggest I should use?
     
    cri8bat, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    can some pls. also help me in creating an eyecathing text ad for adwords for this website.
    I would really apreciate this :)
     
    cri8bat, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    remove those adsense ads now! what do you prefer a sale and a commission $20 or $30 or a single click that pays yo just $0.05? obvious right! You don't want to lose those potential customer ;)
     
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    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    Hi, tkx for the advice :)
    I that in mind, this is just temporarely...

    btw I just changed the font colors to a darker color hope this is more readebly now....
     
    cri8bat, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    It's still aching my eyes. You really need to get rid of the turquoise in the menu.
     
    brouwer, Nov 18, 2008 IP
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    Perhaps a softer version of the color would be better? The header text is kind of chopy to me.

    If it were mine I would adjust the header text.... The color does not hurt my eyes, but I have my monitor dimmed...
     
    thewahm, Nov 18, 2008 IP