Hi all yesterday and today I finished my landing page from scratch! can some1 pls. review and give some tips and advice in how to make sales the url is: http://www.eczemacuretoday.com thank you
doesn't work properly in Firefox. Fine in IE and looks alright, but the pictures scared the s**t out of me lol
Viewed in FF3: Not a bad colour but I can't read the links on the left hand side. The woman's picture at the top is squashed shorter than it should be too. So not a bad start, but needs some work
1. Make a proper header. 2. Do some formating for the text. 3. Create effective call to action At the moment, it looks nothing like a landing page.
Needs work man, I opened it in Opera and Firefox and the links on the left didn't show i.e they were the same color as the background. Make it look professional, and as Blackman said, have an effective call to action. Let the user know which product is the best and why, and make him visit that product
Hi I know there is a problem with Firefox I am trying to fix it... IE works well " create effective call to action " isent the pictures and the product review page doing that???? http://www.eczemacuretoday.com/product_review.html or should I put that on the home page???
I think a lot of improvisation is needed.Now the customer is really confused because of various products from the same niche.My advise is to promote one or at most two. Good Luck
On your main page there is no call to action. You have just a description of some products, and some links, you're not telling the user what to do. You need to have precise, coherent information, that will make it trivial even for the dumbest user to know what to do. Step 1- State/Describe the problem (Eczema is a.....) Step 2- Provide a solution and state why that solution is the best (This product is the best way to cure eczema because...) Step 3- Confirm that the product is the best by putting something at the end like - "Don't know where to go from here? I Recommend Product #1... Click Here to Visit Product #1 This way the user won't get lost and know exactly what to do.
I thought about that and people over this forum told me that review pages works much better tkx for the tips, so the http://www.eczemacuretoday.com/product_review.html page is not good enough ??? any thing else?
It's better than your main page but needs work, you need to put a nice introductory text to present the problem, and then present the solution via the reviews. 5 Products it's too much IMO, go for 3 products, say something like, 'We reviewed 10 of the most popular remedies for curing eczema, and here are out top 3 picks' The first and second product that you have currently reviewed have both a 5 star rating, meaning the user won't know which one to choose. You need to make one product a winner, Give the first one 5 star, the second one 4 stars... etc.. So that the user knows exactly which product is the best and which one to choose.
hi all thank you all! I took your advice and made some modifications I still promoting 5 products tho (will see how it goes) so what do you think now? does it look like a saling page???
I like it, I think with some good seo and a few videos you could start selling eczema products right away. Good luck to you!
Still need to work on the above. Turquoise + Eczema Images = Ouch!!!!! Maybe the two combined will force the customer to click thru,...Can't get much worse! Don't mean to be o.o.o The color could well work though - wedding speeches 4 u (dot) com 4 example is god awful - but the design delivers best conversions so they say.