Pls review my first blog

Hi to all... I have blog www.commercialjunky.com only few months old, well traffic is very low this time...but i need suggestion on placement of ad....is that ok or should i try something different.

 

Your blog actually looked quite mature and the ad placement was also good. I thought I could try my hands on giving a few advice, but I can definitely use some.

 

thanks buddy...but still if you have any suggestion do let me know...

 

I'm not really liking the ad colors, and your blog has some serious English Grammar errors. You should hire a writer, no seriously you really should.

 

Spelling and grammar are in serious need of overhauling.

 

blending is very nice.

you can try to add one link unit under your main menu

 

thanks for your feedback,

yep i believe that English is not my first language, but i think i will improve it by the time.......

trichnosis>>...what exactly you mean by adding a link unit under main menu......i think i already added....ad link unit after leader board.

I personally think because of low traffic i am not getting much click......like at present only 50 visitors hits my blog.....

 

seems gr8. keep on adding new content. you are on the right path.

 

thanks, buddy,

I have done a little change from earlier one......i put ad on right side just after the google search.....so that it will be more visible....

i hope it will be fine .....

can any one give me suggestion on CTR....right now my CTR is around 4 is it good or not?