Pls review embeddable Coloring Book site

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    My Coloring Book is a Flash based coloring book that you can install on your website. It's very configurable, and you can add your own coloring pages.

    The information for the product previously existed as part of a larger site, but it had become a bit unwieldy, so I've created a new subdomain for it and done a major overhaul to make the information clearer and more accessible. I'm about to lauch into a marketing offensive, so I want to be sure it looks good, and that people can find the information they need.

    Please have a look, and tell me what you think...
    http://mycoloringbook.keasoftware.com

    In particular please let me know if you notice any broken links or typos, or cannot find answers to questions a potential customer might have. Also if you think there may be weaknesses from an SEO point of view, please point them out too.

    Thanks!
     
    xtempore, Sep 13, 2011 IP
  2. xtempore

    xtempore Greenhorn

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    What sort of description do you think it needs? I actually tend to be quite verbose normally, so I was making a conscious effort to be more succinct.

    Does anyone else think more description is needed? If so, where and what?

    Thanks
     
    xtempore, Sep 13, 2011 IP
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    xtempore Greenhorn

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    Does anyone else find it annoying when people just trying to fulfil their minimum posts come on and write a 5-6 word review. I wonder if they have even looked at the sites?
     
    xtempore, Sep 13, 2011 IP
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    I just done my coloring on my website... I found it pretty cool and exciting for kids :)
    Good job
     
    dabney.lewis, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    I think your color combination is really good and content of the site is good too, you should add better header
     
    jackpot12, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    xtempore Greenhorn

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    @jackpot12: By "better header" are you referring to the graphics, or the html header? In what way "better".

    @dabney.lewis: what's your site? I'd love to check it out.
     
    xtempore, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    This is a pretty good site. Is there any way you can make the flash content a bit faster. I tried using the paintbrush and it slow as hell.

    The overall design should be more web2.0 and colourful since it is a kids website.
     
    tupacmo, Sep 14, 2011 IP
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    @tupacmo: I've tested it on some pretty clunky old machines, and the paintbrush goes just fine. Were you running something else CPU intensive at the time? Or maybe it's something specific to your version of the shockwave/flash player. Any additional info that might explain it would be great. Thanks.

    I also take on board what you say about the site appearance. One thing to note though is that the site ISN'T for kids. It's for website owners who want a really cool customisable coloring book for their site.

    Cheers
     
    xtempore, Sep 15, 2011 IP