pls. review/critique my very new website

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    cri8bat, Oct 24, 2009 IP
  2. mony911

    mony911 Peon

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    #2
    ur site is good overall. but u might wanna change the body background..., u may try making it fixed rather scroll...
     
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  3. bloggthemes

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    #3
    Suggest using a PNG rather than a JPG/GIF for the background.
    PNG will allow shadows in transparencies;)
     
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  4. DartLady

    DartLady Active Member

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    It's a good site. I like that you have only one product and you've kept it to one page. What I DON'T like is that every time someone clicks on a powerball, it takes them to Amazon. If you could find a supplier and keep the people on your site, it would be much better. You have a certain niche and can utilize that well. Have you checked to see the SEOC and SEOT for this product - can you dominate the niche? If so, I would urge you to find a supplier and not use amazon. Keep the people and the money for yourself.

    The other problem is that you send people away from your site and no one opts in - so how are you getting a mailing list? These are things to consider - you could utilize this and really take over the niche!
     
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    Agree, maybe just have the background once and not repeated?
     
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  6. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Thank you guys for your comments!

    I did took your advice and change the background from reapet-y to backgroung fixed.
    what do you think know?

    DartLady, I agree with you but I do not know where to put the subscription texfield? any ideas? or should I put as a dhtml popup menu with a 5sec delay?

     
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  7. AlwaysAngelic

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    The content of the website is good.. the background idea is too good.. Nice idea.. looks professional :) Certain alignment issues are there in widgets... check out the code of that alone.. :)
     
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  8. DartLady

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    Although I don't know how to do it, there is a way to put your opt-in between your page and Amazon. Talk to a web designer who does sales pages and see if they can help you. (If you find someone really good, let me know!).

    That way, when someone clicks on the powerball, they have to opt in before being taken to Amazon. This way, you get their information for an email list.
     
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  9. Hendrick

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    hi. ... i looked at your site few minutes and i think, that background is not necessary at all. leave white background.
    next... i do not like your video clip. why? because it is so extended and becomes boring. speaking is very slow, thinking what to say... and again the same powerball picture in video clip by left side... you can make a little logo of that ball in video screen, but not a half of the screen... and one more time: you must train what you will be talking about this product and talk normal speed. i think people likes concrete conditions and proposals.
    you must make e-commerce shop without redirecting to amazon.com (like was mentioned by DartLady: "I would urge you to find a supplier and not use amazon. Keep the people and the money for yourself."). its like your site advertising the trademark of Amazon... just imagine, that you are customer and when think about how to sell the product.
    its my opinion about your site.
     
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  10. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    I am a webdesigner and I do salespages.
    I also do optin pages. the way to do what you are suggesting is to make the amazon wiget link into a redirect link, and then create a function that will check if the redirect link is active it will make the optin page visible.

    which is one option, other option would be to make a popup window with a delay of...lest say 8 seconds.

    I have 2 lists made these way, but the problem is that what kind of articles should I write to my subscribers, I do not know much about this niche, butI know that is profitable, because it was for 109 days str8 on the first position of amazon bestsellers :)
     
    cri8bat, Oct 26, 2009 IP
  11. merlinseo

    merlinseo Well-Known Member

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    Hi,
    Here is some analysis of ON-PAGE FACTORS (META TAGS & TITLE)

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    Now most important thing :

    You do not have any Meta-Tag Keywords in your site. These are crucial to your sites search engine positioning.
    You are wasting your opportunity or resources provided to you for usage in meta keywords tag. You can use up to 1000.

    For meta description : You can use upto 250 char and you are effectively utilising 186, also you can add upto 5 main keywords in your META description

    Title : Your title is good and you can still make use of it upto 100char , currently its 50 char. You can add upto 3 main keywords in your title
     
    merlinseo, Oct 27, 2009 IP
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    good domain name.. nice design.. :D
     
    johnabruzzi, Oct 27, 2009 IP
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    I like the design of the content area, but the gray and horizontal striped bits are ugly. It needs a proper logo, too.
     
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  14. cri8bat

    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Hi merlinseo,

    thanks, its my bad
    I by mistake put 2 meta descriptions, I just emend it.
    thanks you :)



     
    cri8bat, Oct 27, 2009 IP