pls. critique my new landing page

Hi all,

I just created a new landing page and would apreciate your critism about it

and suggestions are also very welcome

how to write a cv

 

I think your landing page is good. It will get high conversion rate. Good luck

 

might just be me, but it doesnt seem to look right in larger screen resolution, the nav bar is way out of place

 

Maybe u can add more info, so that customer will understand and make customer thinks thats important to buy

 

Same here, I have a 1920x1200 screen and the nav bar is right in the middle of the page making it unreadable.

 

really!

can you guys send me a screenshot pls.

thank you

 

Here you go http://i40.tinypic.com/2s01fmq.jpg

 

thanks for the screenshot

will work on that later on

and let you guys know

 

No prob, your welcome.

 

I don't like the pop-up. Every time I see a pop-up I leave the website and never come back.

 

thanks for your opinion

I am giving away 24 CV templates and building a list.
It work for me on the past

 

get ride of the popup .

#menu{
float:right;
padding:10px;
position:relative;
top:-500px;
width:170px;
}

 

by editing like that on css, it will do no good for other smaller resolutions....

I just edited the html code,
can some1 pls. tell me how does it look now on bigger resolutions pls.

thank you

PS: a screenshot would be very helpful

 

Looking good now http://i41.tinypic.com/6ycyuw.jpg

 

thanks for the screenshot tibor28

so guys any more comments...

 

Your colors are not the best they can be. Your header is not professional at all. If you need help creating a header I will help you create it free of charge.

Mike G

 

If you can add a new picture in the top banner that is higher resolution than the current one would be great since this one is pixilated and blurry a bit.