Plese Review My Landing Page

I have been doing research on how I sell my 3 page report/ebook. I only get to sell my ebook on forums and not through my landing page.

Please give me feedback. Good or Bad I just want to know the truth.

Here is my landing page: http://www.kushmoney.com/eBooks/adbrite-blacklabelads.php


Yes, its on my blog url which is http://www.kushmoney.com

 

Wow. And you think that you would be able to sell this? I'm sorry, but I have to admit I've seen at least a thousand variant to the same sort of thing, and none of them really deliver (I know because I've crawled and obtained most of the pdfs they "claim" to offer richness).

Oh well. If you wanted a review, my advice is to make it look *anything but* the ones we see. Something new, please?

 

I don't see how its just like the same as the rest. Yes, I use the same simple layout but the words and screenshots are all from me and what I personally did.

 

Change the layout up to make it look more original...

 

I would change the fonts - particularly on the testimonials

 

agreed with above two users..
fonts need change.

 

What should I changes the fonts to and what size?

 

You need to have you action statement more pronounced when someone hits you page. Right now my eyes are drawn down and I get completely lost...I have to think about what you are selling and why I need it.

Second you need to give people more opportunities to buy, put the "buy it now" button in more often, after ever action statement and very importantly after your PS

As for the text I didn't read it, however you should ensure all of you action statements and words stand out...bold them underline them something..... You are probably paying for the visitor so make sure that you get your point across to them.

::EDIT::

You NEED a money back guarantee....if you don't then why would I buy it....Saying that " I do not guarantee income... " instantly makes me think SCAM...

 

It's really dull and not attractive at all. Reminds me of Internet Marketing in the 1990's

 

I will work on the landing page, make sure things stand out, add more buy now buttons.

I am not paying for visitors, they are from my blog and Search Engines.

I will not offer a money back guarantee... that would allow assholes to buy it, read it, get their money back, and still have my ebook and profit from using it.

 

Well, I hope everything works out for you Keep trying

 

thanks, I will. I like learning as I work towards my goals.

 

I agree looks like every other E-book selling site. Make the layout original, there are some very good web designers here on DP.

 

your paymentproof image is unreadable