please tell me the truth!

I think its too long as of now but im not sure what to remove and what to keep. I plan on marketing it through several email campaigns. I want my site to be tip top shape before i blast it out there. So please give me a honest review and any tips would be greatly appriatiated.

www.completetrafficcourse.com


thanks to all!

 

I am not a fan of long copy but for a long copy site, I think it looks great!

 

its not long.

Change the background.

 

I see these things and all i feel is they are trying to sell me snake oil. I'm not calling you out or anything but maybe you can condense or mix it up a bit. I've seen these Longggg sales pitches so many times, as soon as I'm on one I'm also clicking the "X" to close it as i really don't think even 1 out of 500 visitors will read the entire thing.

Read through it yourself completely and then try to find any filler content that isn't absolutely necessary.

 

the contents are too long.

maybe you can make it short and simple..

 

I checked your site and it looks fine to me.

 

it looks good to me too.

 

I've read longer letters and your site looks good to me. Maybe some testimonials would help - and put some ads on it.

 

I think there are a lot of sites designed similar to this. Hence better use a different template.