Please take a look for me

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by bingoboots, Jun 12, 2009.

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    Hello team

    I've currently been out of the loop working on some new things , i made some major mistakes the first time round that had cost a lot of money and time reaping no reward what so ever.

    My new venture , is something i care about , it's taking some time and this time i'm doing everything myself , slowly and surely.

    I'm hoping it may grow , but the building is taking so much time when i've finished work.

    Any advice or hints, tips would be appreciated.

    Just after some opinions on how this is looking


    Many thanks


    James

    www.menequip4life.com

    Oh, i did not even want google to find it yet , however all the pages are indexed so far and we get crawled every other day, something must be ok.
     
    bingoboots, Jun 12, 2009 IP
  2. pipes

    pipes Prominent Member

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    It has an older style to it tbh, theres a lot of blank space at the bottom
     
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  3. Garyhvactec

    Garyhvactec Peon

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    I just checked your site its to early to tell its only one month 23 days old just keep building showing google has 30 pages indexed and 16 inbound link from yahoo and alta vista.
    Keep up the good work, Good luck
     
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    eruct Well-Known Member

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    I would agree with 'pipes' that the site looks 'older'. It looks a little dated, like it is 10 years old or so, not content but the design.

    If you are in love with the design, that's cool it's your site but I would recommend a few things.

    First, like 'pipes' mentioned there is a ton of wasted space at the bottom of the homepage. You should get rid of it or add some articles/ content to that section. Also think about adding a footer with at least an 'about' and 'contact' link.

    And second, I think you should move all of the links to the left column and 'team menequip4life' and 'russell's story' to the right. As it is now, the words direction, action, power, etc. look like they are links but they appear instead to be some kind of motto.
     
    eruct, Jun 12, 2009 IP