Please see the logo and appreciate/criticise :)

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by HotSpot, Aug 22, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi

    i just made this logo for my website.

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    Me is ready for all the professional / positive criticism or even appreciation :) so... have a look and pls give some feedback.

    Thanks in advance!
     
    HotSpot, Aug 22, 2006 IP
  2. Skinny

    Skinny Peon

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    #2
    Looks cool. What I would do it shrink it down a bit.

    Then I'd have it in this form.

    LOGO
    VIAN WORKS

    The logo should be centered.

    Skinny
     
    Skinny, Aug 22, 2006 IP
  3. HotSpot

    HotSpot Peon

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    well.. thanks :) I'd give it another go for sure.. but could u or any other member highlight something that i am missing from art point of view cos i havent taken any prior gfx/art courses? like one of ma frend didnt like that blade-like V .. so me being curious for more feedbacks :)
     
    HotSpot, Aug 23, 2006 IP
  4. wd_2k6

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    #4
    I'm not an artist but it's a nice logo if i had to force a criticsm i would say try to remove the white bubble border thing around the text "Vian Works" because i think it clashes with the white background too much.
     
    wd_2k6, Aug 23, 2006 IP
  5. eXe

    eXe Notable Member

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    I like it, allthough I think you need a more distinct font for the text, one that stands out. The logo is good, especially the way it spirals in and out.
     
    eXe, Aug 23, 2006 IP
  6. HotSpot

    HotSpot Peon

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    first off, thank u so much all who have responded to my post so far.. one thing i jsut forgot to mention is that the TEXT for the logo is something which i never really worked on - i just put there to portray the concept behind VW. newayz.. wud welcome more artitsts' criticism on the logo pls before i finalize this thing.

    Thanks again :)
     
    HotSpot, Aug 23, 2006 IP
  7. alterego85

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    logo? what logo? help me, i can't see them.
     
    alterego85, Aug 28, 2006 IP