please see and suggest!!

This is my new sale page...i make new modifications in it and want to make an adward ad, so suggest an ad to me..

Also, if you see something wrong in my sale page,tell me..

My sale page

Waiting Your Suggestions!!

Thanks,

 

Looks pretty good....

Just center the Highlighted boxes of text and the rest looks pretty nice, keep improving it.

 

Lots to read, and i don't really interesting on it.
i think you should make it simple.

 

creates a colored banner ... for being in the same stile with boxes

 

Good site, I'm like with your product.
can i get more discount friend?

 

using center alignment it would look nice

 

looks nice you done good job on it but as above mentioned That it have lot of content and its a very long page so its difficult to Review for Person whos not interested in your Product , and i think for that person too who's interested in your product so make it simple

 

There's a lot to read. It makes it boring.
The design looks too dull.

good luck!

 

The ideea is fine ..but you coud center the site , it looks better ...the font to text is to big ...and you can make more pages...and the design can be much better ... keep working !

Good luck !