Please reviwe my landing page.

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    sixsense, May 14, 2010 IP
  2. decadance

    decadance Active Member

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    sorry, but i think you put too much padding for the content there..that bothers me a lot..

    that's all i can say,

    good work, by the way. :D
     
    decadance, May 14, 2010 IP
  3. petr_ind

    petr_ind Notable Member

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    hmmmm,, the left side bar is not good.. the color... may be youcan change it so it doesn't pale
     
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    I agree, the left side - color, size (too big) -- maybe the adsense...
     
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    jezzz Notable Member

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    For Landing Page prospective! it not looks that much attractive to guide some one for product lead sales however you can stick to Single Based Content! with some eye catchy design that can allow users to have more access for the product unless its looking like simple descriptive pages
     
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    sixsense Well-Known Member

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    Thanks, could you give me for example web which good landing page?
     
    sixsense, May 14, 2010 IP
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    make it catchy and colorful. and add some more images. a good landing page must be compelling to the reader.
     
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    The first thing I thought is that this landing page is too bland. Give it some life and color and pictures. Also if your goal is for your visitors to click on the amazon link, I think it needs to be higher up on the page. You shouldn't have to scroll down to see it.
     
    jlabrash, May 14, 2010 IP