Please reviews my site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by kongkalingkong, Nov 30, 2009.

  1. #1
    I just recently making new site in car valet niche, and more than 20 articles include. But over three days and my site not yet in #1 googge SERP, any review please...??? :D
    http://carvaletsite.com
     
    Last edited: Nov 30, 2009
    kongkalingkong, Nov 30, 2009 IP
  2. kongkalingkong

    kongkalingkong Peon

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    #2
    Any review to site please... :D
     
    kongkalingkong, Dec 1, 2009 IP
  3. thestrangefruit

    thestrangefruit Active Member

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    #3
    Link didn't work for me. However, just because you make a quick site an add articles doesn't guarantee you 1st spot on google. You have to learn SEO and build it over time.
     
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  4. ssrock

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    #4
    i can open it but it is too simple you need to more improvement
     
    ssrock, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  5. karamallal

    karamallal Peon

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    #5
    you should add some background color
     
    karamallal, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  6. LargeChimp

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    #6
    Site is bland, and you wont get anywhere on google with a few articles and a quick launch site.

    Google ranking takes time, effort, days of long hard work.

    Beleive me.
     
    LargeChimp, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  7. securesite

    securesite Well-Known Member

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    #7
    I would power your site from someone else then free adsense sites and grab a new licensed template. Great idea and good luck.
     
    securesite, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  8. yanurmal

    yanurmal Peon

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    #8
    To increase your PR you need to create a website has unique content and have links back from the website has a PR, higher is better.
     
    yanurmal, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  9. kushsolitary

    kushsolitary Active Member

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    It is very very simple. You must add background and more design to it.
     
    kushsolitary, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  10. Cape Fear Band

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    #10
    the my articles part on the right is way too jumbled. suggest either having less, or creating some sort of filter to search for them, or just having the last 5 articles with a hyperlink to more if they so wish which would open in a new window.
     
    Cape Fear Band, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  11. Rigmonkey

    Rigmonkey Greenhorn

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    #11
    Simplicity isn't always a bad thing but the inability to find information is. For my money, the content links look too compressed and are difficult to read. Bearing in mind that you need clicks, there's very little on the site to make me want to proceed further.

    The written content is poor. There's little that I can see in there that's particularly different in terms of attracting traffic and although I ply my trade as a writer and editor rather than an IM, it's not going to burst onto the top pages of Google as it stands.

    My best advice - Listen to those who ARE making money from niche websites. There are more than enough places to look!
     
    Rigmonkey, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  12. kevinemarket

    kevinemarket Peon

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    #12
    You should change the color of your adsense units to match that of the rest of your text (choose a different blue). Also, the 'My Articles' links should be displayed above the comment box and needs to be properly aligned.
     
    kevinemarket, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  13. kongkalingkong

    kongkalingkong Peon

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    #13
    Thanks for all, I'll make big plan to rebuilt my site :)
     
    kongkalingkong, Dec 2, 2009 IP
  14. silama

    silama Peon

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    #14
    i thnk you should change your design / template and contents
     
    silama, Dec 2, 2009 IP
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    #15
    yeah, you should change your design / template and contents, keywords
     
    mmfashion, Dec 3, 2009 IP
  16. WebCreate&Promote

    WebCreate&Promote Peon

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    #16
    Yeap, design defenatly must be changed!
     
    WebCreate&Promote, Dec 4, 2009 IP