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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Monga, Dec 16, 2007.

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  1. #1
    Here's my new site, I've been working on.

    www.devcabin.com

    I bought it from some one at DP, then I changed the banner, added some ads on the front page (I have to add some ads on all pages thoe)

    And I just change some other stuff around.


    But Please review my site, of what you like and don't like. Thanks!
     
    Monga, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  2. Slacker

    Slacker Guest

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    #2
    I don't think the 2 skinny adbars look good on the same page, but it may just be me. Nice simple design though :)
     
    Slacker, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  3. mariusse

    mariusse Member

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    But i think that you can put something original there.Maybe some articles and advices.Good luck.
     
    mariusse, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  4. Arctic

    Arctic Well-Known Member

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    #4
    The banner is very professional but the font on the page is very small. Good luck with it!
     
    Arctic, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  5. Monga

    Monga Banned

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    #5
    Thanks for the opinion guys, will be taking your comments into consideration.
     
    Monga, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  6. crazycatsville

    crazycatsville Peon

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    I agree. need to do some changes. Good luck!
     
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  7. Monga

    Monga Banned

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    Thanks crazycatsville. I'm going to get a coder, to add some more tools (have suggestions?) and I'm going to make the page wider and also change the ads around, to generate more revenue.
    Thanks
     
    Monga, Dec 16, 2007 IP
  8. wisdomtool

    wisdomtool Moderator Staff

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    #8
    Your tools fonts should be more visible, your Adsense stick out too prominently, try to integrate them more. Color wise can have darker contrast, the font color is too light, really does not show up much in the page.
     
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  9. rouzer

    rouzer Peon

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    #9
    I agree with wisdomtool, you need to make your services stick out more so make the text bigger and bolder.

    And where you enter your domain you should have an example. Because I didn't know if i needed to enter http:// or www etc. So a example could be used as a guideline for users.

    Your header also changes positions slightly from the pages that have a vertical scroll bar an ones that don't. I'm viewing in Firefox on a 1280 * 1024 resolution.

    You also have different url input boxes on each page, go for one style and use it on every page. I suggest the home page one because it looks the best.

    Nice use of white space, but you could maybe make the page a little wider.

    Keep up the good work. Hope I have given you some helpful tips :)
     
    rouzer, Dec 16, 2007 IP
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    #10
    Make the text size bigger, put up some articles on how to use the tools effectively. Some new unique tools would help as well. Header looks good.
     
    dman_2007, Dec 17, 2007 IP
  11. spaceviewers

    spaceviewers Peon

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    wow text size is ultra small. i usually use verdana 8, which many people think is small, but that's onyl half the size. hurt me eye's.
     
    spaceviewers, Dec 17, 2007 IP
  12. alex_d1

    alex_d1 Well-Known Member

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    #12
    It does look very professional but try to emphasise the other services that you have. Maybe by making a menu across the top, visitors to the site will be tempted to visit your other pages. How they are at the moment kind of looks like they are ads.

    Good luck with the site.

    ALex
     
    alex_d1, Dec 17, 2007 IP
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    swedal Notable Member

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    #13
    Needs some changes it looks too plain
     
    swedal, Dec 17, 2007 IP