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Discussion in 'Websites' started by web-rover, May 25, 2005.

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    Please offer your opinion on style, colour, spelling/grammar etc.

    www. affiliatemarketing.ca
     
    web-rover, May 25, 2005 IP
  2. just-4-teens

    just-4-teens Peon

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    #2
    had a quick look and want to ask y is there some much space between each word?
     
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  3. web-rover

    web-rover Peon

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    #3
    I'll fix that tonight.
     
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    #4
    Looks good, very professional and smooth. No errors as that I can see. Maybe you should get some meta tags in there for SEO use.
     
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    Because he force justified the paragraph, but the box is so small there wasn't really enough words to make it look good.
     
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  6. web-rover

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    Any other comments.
     
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  7. Solicitors Mortgages

    Solicitors Mortgages Well-Known Member

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    #7
    unjustify the text on the left....

    and what does this mean..."Turn your website's web traffic as a publisher."

    shouldn't that have "into profit" somewhere?
     
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    Smyrl Tomato Republic Staff

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    I do not like the red and orange. I would settle on one or the other. Layout looks good.

    Shannon
     
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    Ow. Such a tiny font and it doesn't adjust when I change the font size. I am squinting. This is my pet hate on the web. Try using percentage based fonts or em's instead of absolute font sizes.
     
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    #10
    some great comments

    all taken in to consideration
     
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    #11
    well the red stays. Would you suggest replacing the orange with the same red?
     
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    Smyrl Tomato Republic Staff

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    I would want to try that. I never know what will work until I try it. Figured the red was for the Maple leaf. I like your page.

    Shannon
     
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  13. web-rover

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    e10 Well-Known Member

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    #14
    You asked about spelling WR:

    Merhants
    Support Two-Tire Commission (tier)

    ...

    Increase website visits and market your products and services through our easy-to-use, effective advertising solution.

    ... nothing wrong with spekking but the para is just ... porridge. I´m sure you cab rephrase it to make it more snappy and rewarding.
     
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    web-rover Peon

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    thanks for pointing those out. After awhile it's hard to see what's actually there.
     
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    e10 Well-Known Member

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    Yes, I know. Proof reading your own stuff is very hard. I read once that it is so difficult because your brain presents you with what you intended to write in the first place. You kind of skip over the details.
     
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    #17
    I like your basic style and layout and agree that the orange needs to go. Perhaps some light background at the top, light phantom tint, maybe something that visually represents 'making money' ;)
     
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    #18
    show me the colour you mean..
     
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    #20
    Sorry to jack the thread, but I promise this will be quick and quite topic-related... is it extremely important to have the codes meeting the validation? My pages always have tins of errors when I validate them, but everything seem to be working fine with all the browsers I have been viewing it with...
     
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