Please Review Webpage.

Hello,

I just launched an affiliate program , and I would like people to review the affiliate page and give me feeback on how to improve the page. Any input will be greatly appreciated.

http://www.theworkathomesystem.com/affs/

Thanks for your help,

Marc Elrich

 

It is all about testing and check your conversion!
I think you can improve your page header graphic..

 

At the OP, in what way do you want to improve it?

 

OK, I feel you can incorporate the "the work at home system" text with some kinda of graphics.. Try to use something related to making money from home! May be a graphic that reveals the comfort aspect of "work at home"!

 

Look around for similar sites, try to keep your message above the fold and avoid the long scroll down as half way down you are losing the person's interest.

 

in my opinion the website looks cheesy and not practical, from a CRO point of view it is too busy and you do not convince me just by saying join this because it is fresh!!!
All the marketing and taglines you have are extremely fishy and old hat. It might work where you are but in most advanced markets this will not work. I am not being an ass I am just saying to consider your audience before you launch.

 

I have to agree. I looked at the site, and it is just too long. It would be better to break it up a bit so as to not let people scroll down too much. And yes, there is also much text clutter. Of course, there is much to be said about considering the audience: know what your product is about and who is it for. It is too general, and it also doesn't get to the point at once.

 

They pretty much all look the same. A skinny page, about 800px wide and 5x as long. From that point of view the page is quite standard.

I'd change this:

Got A Question? Email Us At:


.. to a sign up for a newsletter type option with an input field and submit button. And I'd put it at the top and the bottom of the page. That way visitors can't overlook it.