Please review this Tutorial

Discussion in 'CSS' started by bestwriter, Feb 22, 2009.

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  1. #1
    Hello Everyone,

    I have written a tutorial of CSS. Please see the tutorial in this location:

    http://www.css.allaboutwebsite.com/chapters.html

    Please tell me your suggestions like what should I add to make it look more good. Please PM me your suggestions.

    Thank You
     
    bestwriter, Feb 22, 2009 IP
  2. Tommy Arnold

    Tommy Arnold Active Member

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    #2
    Bad English
     
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  3. sumit1710

    sumit1710 Peon

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    #3
    Why do you intend to write when so professional
    written articles are available at w3, better option
    would have been to do a video tutorial using Camtasia.
     
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  4. risoknop

    risoknop Peon

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    #4
    Bad, bad, bad English, crappy tutorial. Sorry dude that's how I see it.
     
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  5. BlueIce08

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    #5
    The grammar could be improved a bit, also the subject of CSS is so broad that maybe you could expand a little more.
     
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  6. shallowink

    shallowink Well-Known Member

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    Commented Code at the top:
    saved from url=(0031)http://www.freeebooksearch.netHome, Sample Chpater, Table of Content, Purchase, Contact Us/

    I stand by the advice I offered on the other thread you started about this.
     
    shallowink, Feb 26, 2009 IP