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    Please help my friend! :)
    I know there are a lots of misstakes in this text!
    Could any1 please currect some?
    Thanks +rep for everyone... :D

    This is the text! :

    Hello in Exelent-shop.22web.net

    If you want something buy you need to send to my email or
    Now is a price cut 20% end of price cut is in December 25
    EXSAMPLE
    1.FIRST NAME
    2.LAST NAME
    3.WHAT YOU WANT TO BUY?
    4.Price
    On Home
     
    GaaPele, Nov 24, 2007 IP
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    Hello and welcome to Exelent-shop.22web.net

    If you want to buy something you need then send me an e-mail to or .
    Currently, there is a price cut of 20%, which ends on December 25

    Example:

    1.FIRST NAME
    2.LAST NAME
    3.WHAT WOULD YOU LIKE TO BUY?
    4.PRICE

    On Home

    Hope that helps sir :)
     
    NsaneNoob, Dec 10, 2007 IP