Please review this site

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    ochiboy84, Jul 19, 2010 IP
  2. _1_

    _1_ Peon

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    #2
    Not bad, why you not use another background color for this site?
    besides white.
    CMIIW :)
     
    _1_, Jul 19, 2010 IP
  3. optimizare

    optimizare Active Member

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    #3
    the site looks nice as it is. But it's too commercial. Work on this a little more and make it look more user friendly
     
    optimizare, Jul 19, 2010 IP
  4. webmastersb

    webmastersb Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Nice logo , you must use more color on your pages ,
     
    webmastersb, Jul 19, 2010 IP
  5. MEMORIES89

    MEMORIES89 Peon

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    #5
    remove youtube video
     
    MEMORIES89, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  6. pixelqueen

    pixelqueen Peon

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    #6
    Nice clean and smart design. The layout is good but the logo is awful.
     
    pixelqueen, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  7. chrkadmin

    chrkadmin Peon

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    #7
    Ok, where do I start....

    What I Like:

    I like the concept of the simple site selling a single product brand via affiliate links with a reasonable amount of "copy". This is good. I like that that there is actual product focus. Almost every website on here that's obviously intending to sell something, forgets that basic concept.

    On the other hand:

    I suspect you are not employed by Crown Laboratories, or own Blue Lizard Sunscreen. The domain name alone may open you up to copyright violations. I am not sure if the logo was of your own design either - it's very similar. Now, most medium level companies are not going to care because you are advertising the product - which leads to the other issue - you have no keyword targeting other than the product name. That currently get you postition 3 in Yahoo, but off the radar everywhere else.

    Just be real careful when using actual product name in domain names, most of time you will be fine, but you never know - I would target more generic stuff.

    Best of Luck!
     
    chrkadmin, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  8. ar2coolwriter

    ar2coolwriter Peon

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    #8
    i would suggest breaking up that big block of writing...and yes, the background should be another color..try a lighter shade of blue
     
    ar2coolwriter, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    #9
    Looks nice!but how to promote it? SEO or ppc?
     
    clixies, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    qdungeng Well-Known Member

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    #10
    need to change color for background
     
    qdungeng, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  11. Hs McD

    Hs McD Peon

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    #11
    i find it too simple but of course the simpler it is, the faster it loads..
     
    Hs McD, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    #12
    I really like the logo :) Overall good job buddy!
     
    chensta, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  13. www.ww1.in

    www.ww1.in Well-Known Member

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    #13
    good site and you need a new favicon

    good luck :)
     
    www.ww1.in, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    aaz48 Well-Known Member

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    #14
    nice design..how do you get the theme?
     
    aaz48, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  15. InvestorMind

    InvestorMind Peon

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    #15
    Looks good, how much time you spent to create it?
     
    InvestorMind, Jul 21, 2010 IP
  16. raviass

    raviass Guest

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    #16
    what about treatment in this video.
     
    raviass, Jul 22, 2010 IP
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    bandorsson Banned

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    #17
    Please change theme.
     
    bandorsson, Jul 23, 2010 IP
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    #18
    As I said before I do not care much about those old 1980s designs. We're in 2010 now there need to be some more effects and web 2.0 over your website.
     
    LeetMan, Jul 23, 2010 IP
  19. ochiboy84

    ochiboy84 Active Member

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    #19
    thank for that really good advice.
    i was thinking about that domain issue as well.
    i just was not sure.
     
    ochiboy84, Jul 23, 2010 IP
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    #20
    Not bad, i like your theme
     
    Owners, Jul 24, 2010 IP