Please review the design of my site

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  1. #1
    Please review the design of my site

    http://www.artofmakingfriends.org/

    this is a pre-beta version..

    what do you think?

    I am actually not a web designer... anyway, I am open to any feedback and comments..

    Thank you
     
    mrx345, Oct 7, 2010 IP
  2. JamesColin

    JamesColin Prominent Member

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    #2
    It's ok for me, except I would use white background not pink, for readibility.
     
    JamesColin, Oct 8, 2010 IP
  3. Irfi0009

    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #3
    pink color is my favorite but u must change color dear.
     
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  4. pieceman

    pieceman Peon

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    #4
    The logo is too busy and like the other two posters stated, it needs a more subdued color scheme.

    You can still use pink as an accent but for eye-strain purposes, you shouldn't overdo it.
     
    pieceman, Oct 8, 2010 IP
  5. mrx345

    mrx345 Peon

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    #5
    Ok, I'll make pink color less bright...

    But what can I do with the top logo??

    I was thinking maybe I don't need bottom logo at all?
     
    mrx345, Oct 8, 2010 IP
  6. Donza

    Donza Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Could you make the page slightly narrower. I surf the web using my little netbook a lot and there are very few sites that I have to use the side scroll. When I do have to use sidescroll, like I do at your site, I usually leave immediately. BTW I have trouble with colour schemes too.

    Cheers Don
     
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    ashfaq Peon

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    #7
    you have use istock photos and its not a good idea for a quality website. I dont know much about it but may be you get ban from your hosting.
    your over all site is good just make site width 980px.
     
    ashfaq, Oct 8, 2010 IP
  8. JamesColin

    JamesColin Prominent Member

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    #8
    if nobody made comment on istock photos is because we know it can't be definitive it's too horrible and we don't assume the op is dumb enough to use those as a final.
     
    JamesColin, Oct 8, 2010 IP
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    #9
    bro honestly change ur theme colour and try to make better so that it looks presentable..........
     
    supernewsworld, Oct 9, 2010 IP
  10. pieceman

    pieceman Peon

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    #10
    Well if you insist on using that logo, consider getting it paid for to remove the watermarks.
    But honestly, I would go in a totally different direction with it. Something less cluttered.
     
    pieceman, Oct 9, 2010 IP
  11. mrx345

    mrx345 Peon

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    #11
    Of course I'll buy photos for the final version! This is just a beta version.

    BTW., I made background less bright - now it's more readable.

    Logo - I like my logo.... it should be bright cuz of the purpose of the site. I was trying to make fancy and not boring.
     
    mrx345, Oct 9, 2010 IP
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    #12
    I think you should read stuff about web2
     
    DrowRanger93, Oct 9, 2010 IP
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    #13
    good concept
    but u need to enforce some thing
     
    amir21, Oct 10, 2010 IP
  14. mrx345

    mrx345 Peon

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    #14
    what is web2? you mean Facebook and Twitter?
     
    mrx345, Oct 10, 2010 IP
  15. mrx345

    mrx345 Peon

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    #15
    Thank you. what should I enforce?
     
    mrx345, Oct 10, 2010 IP
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    #16
    Simple and neat work done with your site
     
    jess23, Oct 13, 2010 IP
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    #17
    Nice job, but the homepage is very busy. The header has a lot going on, and there is a lot of text on the page with not as much spacing as many sites have. I think you should make the center body column narrower, so that there's some more whitespace on the left and right. People will have to scroll more but it will give the site a cleaner look and feel. I like the colors and the menu design.
     
    JimBoom, Oct 13, 2010 IP