Please Review the Content and Layout of my site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by tanksboard, Mar 28, 2010.

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    I am starting to think that my site has a little bit too much clutter in the forum section. Will you please review and maybe give me some feedback as to how to clean it up? I really appreciate the help.

    Visionzgfx.com
     
    tanksboard, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  2. johny2006

    johny2006 Peon

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    I didn't like your header and it is taking time to load. Other than that it is looking good.
     
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  3. tanksboard

    tanksboard Greenhorn

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    Thanks John.

    It is much appreciated.
     
    tanksboard, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  4. Gcbeehler

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    The logo uptop is odd, and I don't know how it relates to the content. Also the "Vizionz GFX makes from real surreal" doesn't make sense.

    I think you mean:

    "Vizionz GFX makes real, surreal" or


    "Vizionz GFX : Making the real, surreal" Or

    That's all I have, but I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to get at. Anyways, I don't think the clutter is too bad, it's just a lot of text in one area but then a ton of white space other places, so it throws off my eyes and I don't know what to focus on.

    Hope that criticism helps and best of luck to you!
     
    Gcbeehler, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  5. 2Emc

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    I am with Gcbeehler ...
    "Vizionz GFX makes real, surreal" or


    "Vizionz GFX : Making the real, surreal" Or
     
    2Emc, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  6. roxikaka

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    I like design, it is on VB forum script?
     
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  7. WayReport

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    Slow moving site. The header is too large and throws off things IMO. What does "makes from real surreal" mean? I don't understand that slug line at all.
     
    WayReport, Mar 28, 2010 IP
  8. tanksboard

    tanksboard Greenhorn

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    Yeah I purchased the site with that slogan on it. I am defiantly going to change it. Why do you think it is slow moving? Is it the large header causing it?

    Gcbeehler. "That's all I have, but I'm not sure I understand what you're trying to get at. Anyways, I don't think the clutter is too bad, it's just a lot of text in one area but then a ton of white space other places, so it throws off my eyes and I don't know what to focus on. "

    How do you think I could fix that. I get the same feeling also.
     
    tanksboard, Mar 28, 2010 IP