Hi, I am updating my website design anf would like some feedback on new page design: http://www.riveroakslimo.com/00-test.php compare to home page @ http://www.riveroakslimo.com/ Thanks
Well firstly, the design doesn't appear to have changed at all. You simply changed the look of a few elements and left it as is. Here are a few suggestions I can make: - The overall feel of this page looks extremely amateurish. No one would take this company seriously after they saw this website. - The animations in the banner make this look like this website is from the 90's. I suggest you actually drop all the animation effects (it's very distracting), and simply work on creating an appealing static banner. - Another point I'd like to make is that this if this is a limo company, some pics of an actual limo on this page would be ideal so it's clear what this this is about. Otherwise I have to actually read your barely legible banner to figure out where I've landed. - In terms of your content, there is far too much text on your home page. You have 2 giant paragraphs which are VERY not tempting to read simply because there is too much. If you broke it up into pieces and styled each part differently, maybe even included a few images, it would make things a lot more user-friendly. (Consider playing with different fonts/colors/sizes) - And also, in terms of layout of the text, all your text is in the middle with huge gaps on either side, this is a horrible waste of space. Consider redoing the layout to make better use of space so all the important information is above the fold.
I tried to include your feedback in my new edition, please give some feedback http://www.riveroakslimo.com/00-tet3.php
Last effort is good. If you are just doing it learning purpose then it's okay. If you going to use for the business then it needs a a lot of facelift. Visit some Gallery Websites for isnpirations. Good luck to you.
Your new site looks almost same to your alder site.The only difference that i noticed was that you chaged the images.In there also,you could have avoided using same vehicle 3 times,it doesnt look good.
Sorry for my earlier reply.I didnt saw your new site.Compared to your older site,this is far better.I liked this layout.